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In the Stillness of Time

a sliver of hope hangs on the valance of darkness cast off from frosted glass of dimly lit street lamps glow a shadow stands alone awaiting on stars to glisten through love's eyes if he were to come this very night the willow on the hill weeps with the air for her as she strolls along alone again lost somewhere in the winter's mist as her tears trail her lips she slips back inside her dreams where he comes to rescue her from the loneliness of darkness it's there time has stilled beneath the pulse of her heart as she races into the comfort of his arms and lingers in his kiss once again

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Date: 1/29/2020 10:18:00 PM
Well done, Sandra! Wonderful word pictures taking us on a journey!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam... hugs
Date: 1/29/2020 7:50:00 PM
Exceptional poem, Sandra:-) Congrats on your top win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/29/2020 8:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Edward... hugs :)
Date: 1/29/2020 12:19:00 PM
Co grays Sandy on your top win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/29/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Brenda :)
Date: 1/29/2020 12:12:00 PM
A true portrait of angst and romance
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/29/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Craig :) hugs
Date: 1/29/2020 9:59:00 AM
It is no surprise to see this beautiful and alluring poem sitting in the winners circle. Congratulations my friend, your talent is amazing.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/29/2020 11:02:00 AM
i take that as a high compliment... thank you Chris :) hugs
Date: 1/28/2020 9:58:00 PM
Sandra, I don't know where it comes from. Your poem arrived through the mist to park in the mind just the same. -Richard
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/29/2020 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard :) hugs
Date: 1/28/2020 1:08:00 PM
sigh.... enough said...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/28/2020 8:59:00 PM
thank you so much... sighs say much sometimes... hugs
Date: 1/28/2020 8:35:00 AM
Great imagery in this ride on emotions--splendidly expressed Sandy--you poem evokes love in every word--as the pulse of heart linger in kiss--I liked the ending.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/28/2020 8:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay, this was one of those sudden writes where my muse just went on a path of her own... hugs
Date: 1/28/2020 6:50:00 AM
Such a beautiful love poem that stirs the senses and touches the heart. I always love a happy ending. Simply gorgeous Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/28/2020 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris... i take that as a high compliment from the best romance writer on the site :) hugs
Date: 1/28/2020 4:09:00 AM
- Your dreams are like an inner compass ... the ability to describe emotions ... express them through your beautiful poems Sandra :) - A beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/28/2020 8:21:00 AM
what a kind thing to say, thank you so much Ann-Lise... hugs
Date: 1/28/2020 3:58:00 AM
Very romantic Sandra, superb imagery. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/28/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom...it came out of nowhere right before bed last night... hugs
Date: 1/28/2020 3:53:00 AM
Mesmerizing imagery to fall in love with dearest, Sandra. Hugs xxx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/28/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios for your kind comment :) hugs
Date: 1/27/2020 9:13:00 PM
Deliciously romantic, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/28/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs

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