In the Snow

In the Snow As I was walking in the Snow, I met a friend I didn't know. You know me, I'm the one, Stole your wife in Eighty One. I smiled, then buried him in the snow

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/16/2018 8:43:00 PM

Your second line has wide appeal, often meet students who recognize me; but I haven't a clue. Your limerick is really that dark, considering it was just snow: I'll just assume he dug himself out, wet and dripping but breathing nonetheless.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2018 6:53:00 PM

Oh yes, it IS dark!! And I enjoyed seeing this one, Kevin. I am glad we can look up titles alphabetically here. Soup offers such a nice array of features!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2017 1:19:00 AM

- A fun limerick, Kevin :) - Well done ! - (Hope it will be a long time until the first snowfall in Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)