In the Snow

In the Snow

As I was walking in the Snow,
I met a friend I didn't know.
You know me, I'm the one,
Stole your wife in Eighty One.

I smiled, then buried him in the snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Poteet Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Your second line has wide appeal, often meet students who recognize me; but I haven't a clue. Your limerick is really that dark, considering it was just snow: I'll just assume he dug himself out, wet and dripping but breathing nonetheless.
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Oh yes, it IS dark!! And I enjoyed seeing this one, Kevin. I am glad we can look up titles alphabetically here. Soup offers such a nice array of features!
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 1:19 AM
- A fun limerick, Kevin :) - Well done ! - (Hope it will be a long time until the first snowfall in Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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