In the Same Evening the Shadow Reveals

The second Shadow reveals
The spotlight reveals 
In the brightness a shadow 
is seen
On a wooden chair
Is wooden arms and legs

The back rest cushion
A turquoise color
Head and the sear
On the seat are
Two bunnies ornaments

When the spotlight shines
The shadow appears
A man and a woman
they stare at each other
Coming closer slowly
When they are closer
They embrace into a
Passionate kiss

this is the second shadows seen
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Ricci Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Good Morning Darlene. Hi. I love your title to which you did not stray. I found this clever. You gave much thought to the moment and scene. Very creative. Without saying, your ending line is priceless. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful week. Peace and Blessings. (smile)
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November 21, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Hello Lisa, good evening Lisa. oh , thank you for the lovely comment. Thank you Lisa i did have a nice day. I wish you a wonderful week. Peace & blessings ]smile[/Darlene/
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:29 PM
My beloved friend, Darlene this is a nice poem. "they embrace to a passionate kiss" revealed by a shadow. Oh God. You touched something deep inside. Loved this. My love María
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October 17, 2023 at 10:45 AM
Hello Maria, Thank you Maria. Thank you for the lovely comment. Love Darlene
Messina Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:14 AM
Hello Darlene...great imagery and a perfect ending! Have a nice day :) Charlie
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:03 PM
Hello Charles, thankyou for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Magdalinos Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:58 PM
Hello Darlene,a nice poem! Have a blessed week!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Hello Mulu, Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
DiMino Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Are not we all shadows, obstructing light in one way or another!? Light wiser to purify, our grace often the shadows. Love it. Well done.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:08 PM
Hello Joe, We all have shadows. Objects have shadows to. Yet I like what you said about the shadows. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Gentile Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Darlene, such lovely images are created by your poetic shadows! I can just see this happening on my wall and it brings a smile!! A happy weekend to you xxoo
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October 13, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Hello Mike, When i see these shadows I watch them and when they embrace I pretend it is me. I see these shadows every night. It brings me a good feeling inside. Thank you. Happy weekend to you to Mike. xxxxxxx/Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 3:23 PM
Love that final verse, Darlene!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 3:27 PM
Hello Kim, Thank you. i also like the last verse. Hugs. /Darlene/
Croft Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Very interesting how all of it comes together. Enjoyed! Have a great day also
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Hello Karen, Thank you Karen. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 1:04 PM
This is a great poem, Darlene! Beginning with the unique title, you have created such a beautiful picture with a shadow, spotlight, and an embrace! So poetic - I really love it!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:18 PM
Hello Mala, Hi! So good to see you Mala. How are you? thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my frind. Love & Friendship /Darlene\
Brotherton Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 8:59 AM
A wonderful poem Darlene. With two shadows, your poet's heart has conjured up a beautiful scene. Well done my friend.
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October 9, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Hello Jerry , Thank you Jerry. Did you have a nice thanksgiving Day? My thanksgiving Day was on Saturday. I had my niece and her husband for 3 days. Enjoy your day my friend. thank you for the lovely comment. ./Darlene/
Babcock Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:30 AM
Well done and written Darlene. Shadows of two lovers kissing. love phyl
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Hello Phyllis, Yes these shadow lovers do this every night. With a passionate kiss. So romantic. Lovers kissing. Love, Darlene/
Baker Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 4:53 PM
Intriguing and well written poetry, Darlene. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us my friend. Hugs, Bill
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Hello Bill, Hi! Your welcome my poet friend. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Darlene, your ability to capture moments is truly awe-inspiring. Your imagery is like windows into a world of stunning beauty,
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Hello Sotto, Thank you Sotto. My imagination see a lot of things in shadows. Like the other poem i created, The Shadow Reaveals .Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\/
DiMino Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Without light we are all shadow -- shadow is object and not merely the casting. And yet, there is an innate relationship...whether sun, moon or stars, or the vast darkness between, somehow, some why, we sense divine illuminating presence. Lovely write, my friend. Profoundly beautiful!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Hello Joe, Thank you Joe. This shadow tells a story if two peop9le in love. Thank you for a lovely comment. Enjoyyour day my friend. /Darlene\
Kauffman Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Very thought provoking, Darlene, as shadows are born from light that can't penetrate solid objects! They seem to have a life of their own - a life you have profoundly captured. Nice work! Blessings!
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October 4, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Hello Sam, Thank you. I see these romantic couple every night. I have no idea where the shadow comes from. Blessings my my friend./Darlene\
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October 2, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Hi Darlene….it is amazing what shadows are cast from different lighting and objects. Well said and nice poem Darlene. Debx
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Hello Deb, yes it is amazing what shadows are cast from from lighting and objects. Enjoy yur day Deb. my friend. /Darlene\x
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Moments beautifully captured, Darlene.
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October 2, 2023 at 3:22 PM
Hello Vijay, thank you Vjay, Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene/
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