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In the Park

Under the oak tree
Acorns fall; wearing brown caps
The squirrels chatter

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 3:47:00 AM

Congratulations on placing 3rd in Brian’s Images of Fall contest with this wonderful haiku. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2009 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Barbara. A delightful entry!!:) ~ Carrie

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/30/2009 4:31:00 AM

Barbara this is a wonderful haiku - congratulations on placing in Brian's contest - God Bless, mj

Constance La France

Date: 8/29/2009 1:47:00 AM

woops.. of course, I mean congratulations... I am typing with left hand as right one has injury...

Constance La France

Date: 8/29/2009 1:46:00 AM

cpngratulations on your win.. a very pretty poem

Date: 8/28/2009 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations on placing third in the contest. Creative imagery gives one a view of autumn. Keep on writing! Karen

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/28/2009 12:59:00 PM

Love the playful images you have in your haiku! Congratulations on your win in this contest.

Donna Golden

Date: 8/28/2009 11:34:00 AM

Sweet piece here, Barbara! Love the second line. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Donna

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/28/2009 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in Brian's Images of Fall Contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 8/28/2009 1:22:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest BG.Rgds Brian .My latest contest Hymn of Harvest is now opened

Abe Lopez

Date: 8/24/2009 8:57:00 PM

wonderful image BarbaraGorelick

James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2009 4:10:00 PM

Apart the Redwood, the mighty Oak is the regal one. Super Haiku Barbara>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/20/2009 8:23:00 PM

the oak tree plays a significant role in our understanding of nature, you have captured a prized moment! Barbara! well done! jmg

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/20/2009 4:31:00 PM

cute, good job

Brian Strand

Date: 8/20/2009 6:02:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest BG.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/20/2009 4:11:00 AM

Barbara, I am just loving this beautiful Haiku. I can see it all right before my eyes. Awesome. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2009 2:34:00 AM

Love the image of acorns "wearing brown caps." This is how they appear, isn't it? Very clever observation and a vivid, pleasant image in this haiku! Love, Carolyn