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In the Old Testament

Between the pages I find our love still glowing First rose you gave me ~~~~~ Author: Elane Cecelia George, of Canada

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John Beam

Date: 7/7/2011 5:17:00 PM

and HE is the lilly of the valley thanks for sharing and your comment

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/27/2011 3:49:00 PM

A wonderful write. Nice to see you saved the first rose given to you. God Bless Phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Lainie. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/21/2011 3:27:00 AM

congrats on this 1st place winning poem! three lines that say so much, I like the image of love expressed in a rose pressed between pages...and thank you for your generous comments on my poem 'still life'...

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/18/2011 7:51:00 AM

spot on, fabulous, congrats, Déirdre

Daver Austin

Date: 2/18/2011 7:29:00 AM

Wonderful what one finds in a bible. Love it. Love, Dave

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2011 4:43:00 AM

I loved this poem the first time I read it and I still do, and congratulations on your placement in Linda's contest~~

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/18/2011 4:42:00 AM

very well done and many congrats for this big win... wonderful my dear..luv Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/17/2011 11:53:00 PM

Many Congrats Elaine for top notch position in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/17/2011 5:19:00 PM

What a beautiful sentimental write! Vince

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/17/2011 4:17:00 PM

for this contest it could not help but be a winner Elaine. Congratulations!

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/17/2011 3:44:00 PM

This is so sweet Elaine. I sure would smile if I found that first rose tucked away in the Bible. Best to you, Diane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2011 1:52:00 PM

Precious and elegant, Lainie. Congratulations to you.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/17/2011 10:26:00 AM

A real stunner Elaine, congratulations on your awesome win ;-)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/17/2011 10:24:00 AM

Congrats Elaine on your 1st place win with this wonderful Senryu.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/17/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/17/2011 9:26:00 AM

Hello Elaine, This is simply lovely, well done and congratulations on your win my dear As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/17/2011 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest, 'Laine! Enjoy your win! Love, Annalise

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/17/2011 12:45:00 AM

what a very sweet and romantic senryu! You got me smiling with this Lainie :) congrats on your win :) -- nikko ;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2011 8:43:00 PM

awwh, endearing... CLAP CLAP for the super win, elaine! :) huggs, nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/16/2011 7:45:00 PM

awesome. Many congrats for this huge win.

John Freeman

Date: 2/16/2011 6:49:00 PM

Great idea for a love scrip, Elaine. Congratulations, good to see you at the top. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/16/2011 6:20:00 PM

Elaine, congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this fine entry. The first time I saw this, I knew it had a good chance.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/16/2011 5:57:00 PM

Oh...love the sentimental momento of this poem!! So glad to share this place with you, Elaine....a lovely poem of remembrance! ~ love, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/16/2011 5:42:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Elaine