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In the Old Testament

Between the pages
I find our love still glowing
First rose you gave  me


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Author:  Elane Cecelia George, of Canada

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John Beam

July 7, 2011 at 5:17 PM

and HE is the lilly of the valley thanks for sharing and your comment

Phyllis Babcock

February 27, 2011 at 3:49 PM

A wonderful write. Nice to see you saved the first rose given to you. God Bless Phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 24, 2011 at 10:34 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Lainie. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 21, 2011 at 3:27 AM

congrats on this 1st place winning poem! three lines that say so much, I like the image of love expressed in a rose pressed between pages...and thank you for your generous comments on my poem 'still life'...

Deirdre Omaidin

February 18, 2011 at 7:51 AM

spot on, fabulous, congrats, Déirdre

Daver Austin

February 18, 2011 at 7:29 AM

Wonderful what one finds in a bible. Love it. Love, Dave

Constance La France

February 18, 2011 at 4:43 AM

I loved this poem the first time I read it and I still do, and congratulations on your placement in Linda's contest~~

Michael J. Falotico

February 18, 2011 at 4:42 AM

very well done and many congrats for this big win... wonderful my dear..luv Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta

February 17, 2011 at 11:53 PM

Many Congrats Elaine for top notch position in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Vince Suzadail Jr.

February 17, 2011 at 5:19 PM

What a beautiful sentimental write! Vince

Robert A. Dufresne

February 17, 2011 at 4:17 PM

for this contest it could not help but be a winner Elaine. Congratulations!

Diane Locksley

February 17, 2011 at 3:44 PM

This is so sweet Elaine. I sure would smile if I found that first rose tucked away in the Bible. Best to you, Diane

Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2011 at 1:52 PM

Precious and elegant, Lainie. Congratulations to you.

Wilma Neels

February 17, 2011 at 10:26 AM

A real stunner Elaine, congratulations on your awesome win ;-)

Kash Poet

February 17, 2011 at 10:24 AM

Congrats Elaine on your 1st place win with this wonderful Senryu.

Jimmy Anderson

February 17, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest.

Sharon Ruebel

February 17, 2011 at 9:26 AM

Hello Elaine, This is simply lovely, well done and congratulations on your win my dear As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick

February 17, 2011 at 9:11 AM

Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest, 'Laine! Enjoy your win! Love, Annalise

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 17, 2011 at 12:45 AM

what a very sweet and romantic senryu! You got me smiling with this Lainie :) congrats on your win :) -- nikko ;)

Nette Onclaud

February 16, 2011 at 8:43 PM

awwh, endearing... CLAP CLAP for the super win, elaine! :) huggs, nette

Tahera Mannan

February 16, 2011 at 7:45 PM

awesome. Many congrats for this huge win.

John Freeman

February 16, 2011 at 6:49 PM

Great idea for a love scrip, Elaine. Congratulations, good to see you at the top. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit

February 16, 2011 at 6:20 PM

Elaine, congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this fine entry. The first time I saw this, I knew it had a good chance.

Carrie Richards

February 16, 2011 at 5:57 PM

Oh...love the sentimental momento of this poem!! So glad to share this place with you, Elaine....a lovely poem of remembrance! ~ love, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 16, 2011 at 5:42 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Elaine

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