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In The Nick Of Time POTD

the day I died
was a rainy one
but the sun came out
in the nick of time
I can laugh about it now
but it was a worry

funhumorouslightlight verse

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Deb M

December 3, 2023 at 1:55 PM

Congratulations on POTD Clive! A very interesting poem….which actually made me chuckle! Cleverly done! Debx

Clive Culverhouse

December 3, 2023 at 2:53 PM

Thanks Deb, appreciate you reading

Bill Baker

December 1, 2023 at 8:35 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Clive. Have a great weekend! Bill

Clive Culverhouse

December 1, 2023 at 10:36 AM

Thanks very much Bill

Charles Messina

December 1, 2023 at 1:30 AM

Thank God the sun showed up, Clive (lol) Congratulations on POTD! Charlie

Clive Culverhouse

December 1, 2023 at 3:24 AM

Thank you Charlie

Tom Cunningham

December 1, 2023 at 12:33 AM

Congratulations to you Nick on the honour of POTD. A thought provoking verse. Tom

Clive Culverhouse

December 1, 2023 at 3:23 AM

Thanks Tom

Brandy Nicole

November 30, 2023 at 4:36 PM

I love everything about the rain, but I understand it can create a gloomy mood for some. So thankful the sun came out in the nick of time. :) Your thoughts hold many emotions. This is deep, with a little humor to lighten the mood. Congratulations Clive, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 11:01 PM

Thanks for giving your time to read my poem Brandy, much appreciated

Paula Goldsmith

November 30, 2023 at 7:29 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "In The Nick Of Time" write. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.................

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 10:52 AM

Thank you Paula

Christina Bowring

November 30, 2023 at 7:26 AM

Many congratulations Clive on POTD. It made me smile but there are profound thoughts too. Surprised to learn this is your first one! (POTD) I'm sure more will follow. :) Blessings to you.

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 10:51 AM

Yep first one so fingers crossed, thanks Christina

Warren Doll

November 30, 2023 at 7:10 AM

Clive, congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 10:50 AM

Thanks Warren

Linda Alice Fowler

November 30, 2023 at 6:33 AM

LOL Clive. Very funny. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 10:49 AM

Thank you Linda

Nancy Kaufman

November 30, 2023 at 6:01 AM

Hi Clive, Thanks for the laugh still early in the am. It's a very witty take on death but if we all have lived and died a hundred other lives (some to believe in this), it makes a lot of sense. Congratulations on your POTD..It's great to be funny in these intense times we are living in. God Bless..

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:25 AM

Absolutely, thanks for your time Nancy

Regina Mcintosh

November 30, 2023 at 5:51 AM

hum... i might like a rainy day for my death, very intriguing. God bless you and congrats on POTD. Love, Gina

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:24 AM

I've thought that, if it was sunny you would feel you were missing out! Amusing thought Regina, thanks for reading

Malabika Ray Choudhury

November 30, 2023 at 5:30 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. You have labelled your poem as light verse, but is it? To me, sounds deep.

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:20 AM

Perhaps, I was going for light because of its "silliness", actually I think I might have inadvertently invented dark light verse, thanks for reading

Daniel Turner

November 30, 2023 at 3:46 AM

Congratulations on POTD Clive.

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:17 AM

Thank you Daniel

Tania Kitchin

November 30, 2023 at 3:33 AM

Clive, congratulations on POTD.

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:17 AM

Thank you Tania

Ink Empress

November 30, 2023 at 2:45 AM

Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:16 AM

Thank you for all your support and enthusiasm for my poems IE

Unseeking Seeker

November 30, 2023 at 2:10 AM

humorous and deep at the same time ~ enjoyed. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Clive

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:15 AM

Thanks for your time, much appreciated

Beryl Edmonds

November 30, 2023 at 1:40 AM

A ray of hope just in time Clive. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day. Belle

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:14 AM

Thank you for reading Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 30, 2023 at 1:13 AM

- Behind rainy clouds ... the sun is shining, Clive - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) -

Clive Culverhouse

November 30, 2023 at 6:13 AM

That's so true, thanks Anne-Lise

David Fisher

November 28, 2023 at 5:12 PM

Enjoyed your poem that's both intense and light at the same time. Very clever.

Clive Culverhouse

November 28, 2023 at 10:44 PM

Thanks for reading David, much appreciated

Ink Empress

November 28, 2023 at 7:38 AM

Sometimes we worry over things, when it rains and when we go through somethings, to later when the sun rise, to look back and laugh over it. Although when things happen it definitely is not the most fun experiences. This is a deep poem. And i think many can resonate. Pleasure reading this

Clive Culverhouse

November 28, 2023 at 7:58 AM

The humour of it aside, it is a deep poem, thank you for your thoughts upon it, much appreciated IE

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