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In the Meadow - Re- Posted

The darkness falls i am here alone I  wanted the peace and quiet To lie here in the bluebells and think A heavenly retreat to quell my mindful riot I am lying here , when i felt a gentle touch Like fairy whispers on my skin My eyes wouldnt open my senses were such I arched  my back I felt his body within What seemed like hours we made love Satiated  I fell asleep, was this a dream When i awoke i was still alone, lips bruised,  Body aching covered in loves cream I looked about nothing to suggest I wasnt the only person here Then I  saw it amongst the bluebells A single red rose to say I was here  In the meadow 17 April  2013

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Date: 4/24/2013 6:49:00 AM
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/24/2013 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Judy...Seren
Date: 4/23/2013 10:53:00 PM
What a sensual piece you have created here Seren...just so lovely...luv,Deb
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/24/2013 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Deb fr stopping and commenting...Seren
Date: 4/23/2013 10:15:00 PM
I loved this incredible write the first time I saw it, however I believe I love this poem a little more now the second time around! I knew what to expect and that made the experience that much better! I do read poems multiple times when I read them, in case I missed something! I'm glad to have a chance to read this one again! What a tremendous piece my friend, awesome poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/24/2013 12:24:00 AM
Thanks Russell had a re- think...Seren

Book: Shattered Sighs