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In the Loom of Clouds

a pillar of strength i am not an emptiness consumes me like these trees in their starkness in this harsh winter breath my thoughts stifled by the winds that sweep past the pools of tears that lie frozen like beads of glass in the depths of somber eyes my lips sipping coffee trying to regain warmth from the kiss of death's lips and this bitter air that surrounds them my arms reaching beyond shadows like trees reaching for the sun trying to find warmth of arms to comfort me... falling short within the loom of clouds as they gather around me my soul feels as lifeless as all that is around me in the wake of winter's glum silently searching for something to lift me back up off this ground to make me dance, like autumn's leaves in the warmth of winded breaths my heart shattered -crumbles within awaiting the pulse of night to come to carry it on the wings of dreams where happiness is in existence and absence is often less felt

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Date: 12/19/2019 5:33:00 PM
You communicated brilliantly the sadness one feels when facing life's sad moments---a heartfelt write, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/19/2019 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay...i think i carried home lots of the sadness from the church last night while at the viewing... it's always sad to lose someone from our lives... hugs
Date: 12/19/2019 3:52:00 PM
Your empathy shines through in this somber write, one person shouldn't have to endure such pain of heart. Loved this one...beauty in the sadness!
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Date: 12/19/2019 7:14:00 PM
Thank you John...i am hoping the death trend doesn't continue... lost enough in the last year... this was a cousin that was like an uncle...i was very close to this family and it feels like the end of an era.. hugs
Date: 12/19/2019 2:50:00 PM
Hi Sandra, What a sad write. Your poured you heart in this write. Poetry is good way to express how we are feeling. You did that very well. It saddens me to hear that you feel this way. I know it doesn't feel like it, just know it gets better with time. You shall see Sunshine and lovely rainbows again-Alexis
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/19/2019 7:13:00 PM
Thank you Alexis...another relative passed away, his viewing was last night, the funeral today...it brought back the scars of other christmas burials and all those missing...i will be fine... hugs :)
Date: 12/19/2019 11:11:00 AM
Sandra, your pain is as deep and bleak as grey storm clouds. I am so sorry for your emotional pain. Remember this...soon those clouds will spill rain like we spill tears and then the sun will brighten your days. I hope writing about your grief helps to lighten the burden.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/19/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Lin...I was at a relatives viewing last night, there always seems to be one at this time of year ... I always said I was an empath and I guess I carried all of their pain home with me. Writing it out usually helps ... hugs
Date: 12/19/2019 10:47:00 AM
My heart breaks as I sit here reading this sad and lonely poem this morning. The sorrow in your words is deep, it gathers in the corners of my mind that as it wonders what it came to do make you smile. I am so sorry that sadness flows in your ink today my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/19/2019 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Chris. I was at a viewing of a dearly loved family member... one of the kindest souls I ever knew ... I carried the families pain home with me today. I can’t stop thinking about his beautiful wife and the sorrow in her eyes. The emptiness. She was always such a bright cheery person and I could feel the depths of her soul’s pain. Hugs

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