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In the Land Beneath Falling Stars

In The Land Beneath Falling Stars there is an echo, down canyons of stone, its sorrows beg relief, yet the clouds above, each one sings on all alone as the desperate heart seeks to atone. there is a trumpet, its notes very clear, its loud aching cries, mournful into dawn's rise, each night, ghosts of laughter ring throughout dark and empty halls of fear. there is a singer, her voice booming loud its vibrations so strong, with patterns that breach, imprisoned souls defying ancient dead kings, once so very proud. R.J. Lindley, August 3rd, 1990 Free verse, ( Within Dawn's First-Born Rays )

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Date: 6/15/2019 8:26:00 PM
My dear friend, first let me say that I think your title for this exquisite and artistic poem is absolutely wondrous. What a vivid impression to set the stage for your magnificent write. Your poem wears the patina of a time-worn luster through the enchantment of your potent imagery, Robert. Superb, moving, a gem and a fav! Warmest wishes always, wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/1/2019 5:09:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful Robert. I soup mailed you. xxoo Connie
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Date: 5/30/2019 5:45:00 PM
There's some powerful imagery here; well penned. I love, "canyons of stone"; "mournful into dawn's rise,"; "patterns that breach, imprisoned souls defying ancient dead kings,"
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/31/2019 10:07:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Such a great comment and one that gifts inspiration to this old poet immensely.... God bless....
Date: 5/29/2019 11:28:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Robert! Your imagery sparks the imagination n your fine verse. Love it! :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/31/2019 10:06:00 AM
Thank you my friend, your kind comment stirs my appreciation and my desire to continue composing poetry.
Date: 5/29/2019 4:54:00 PM
Hi Robert: A very eloquent preamble especially the last stanza. My compliments!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/31/2019 10:05:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am very glad that you have found this one to be a very eloquent preamble. God bless....
Date: 5/29/2019 4:11:00 AM
Love 'imprisoned souls defying ancient dead kings'! The tone of the whole thing is sad and ancient, like a hymn to the rock-bound hills...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/29/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Sad and ancient I was in that thought. Each word my muse kindly brought. Her warnings I did not heed. I created using a dark seed. Yet Caissa gave of her fruit. Cupid's laughs as he shoots. Deep waters quenched no thirst. I came in last, felt like first....

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