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I was a daydreamer and stargazer, who eagerly awaited calm nights of glitter, Like blue skies warily turning pink, plum and red, as orange sun sinks, bitter. I grew familiar with diverse constellations, along the different astral avenues, Vanishing in the pink dawn of golden, like perpetual lime spring, begun anew. Mystic planets of my shady, solar precincts, soon became a lot more familiar, Like dreamy twilights of sweet romance, when the gigantic moon is a thriller! Flamboyant flowers fumed fragrance, as my friends found me on fun Fridays, Like jazzy flower fields are ofttimes revisited, to gather up prettiest bouquets. Fun family was a deep force in my life, like the force making fuchsias flourish, When amassed together at violet sunrise, to discover what joy they'd missed! I lived in a house of modern dance, guided by a classical sun, moon and stars, In glazed golden noon or purple midnight, and ofttimes we'd tango with Mars. Pearls and sun jewels were ever pouring, along jade scenic sites of my street, With wandering wind whispering, 'mystery,' below fat clouds moving, discrete. Names of folk nearby were household words, in abodes of friendly neighbors, As honey is a household word, inside golden walls of the honeybee chambers. Sun-sational summer settled on grasses and trees, as it did many moons ago, In the time of emergent purple butterflies, and misty brown sunsets of cocoa. Frogs croaked as blooms spread down mountainside, when time was running, Like frothy, rapid river, ever flowing, under hued chameleon clouds, stunning. One evening, dusk came suddenly, like the lullaby moon encroaching on trees, When flashforward fireflies lit up purple twilight, and robins supped on berries. I felt I had never seen such a gloaming, for dazzling stars flashed in my eyes. The beauty touched all within sight, like rapturously hued fall, of no disguise. The moon rocked a mulberry sunset world, with milky stars of my fascination; And sweet songbird tunes filled scarlet skies, in changing colors of revelation. Emerald daytime's echo was in a red sun sky, as I felt the unity of all creation, Like unity of sunshine and mellow time, transforms a juicy grape into a raisin. And I realized our sky spans far beyond the blue, and clouds of various colors, So, glowing stars are a real part of us, like myriad people from other cultures!

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Date: 10/30/2023 10:46:00 AM
"I grew familiar with diverse constellations, along the different astral avenues, Vanishing in the pink dawn of golden, like perpetual lime spring, begun anew." "I lived in a house of modern dance, guided by a classical sun, moon and stars, In glazed golden noon or purple midnight, and ofttimes we'd tango with Mars." "Names of folk nearby were household words, in abodes of friendly neighbors, As honey is a household word, inside golden walls of the honeybee chambers." Incredible writing! A FAV
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/30/2023 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely remarks and also for your fave, my friend. It was sheer joy to read your comments today. Blessings.
Date: 10/30/2023 1:49:00 AM
Amazing imagery in your couplet poetry, Evelyn. I liked the way you related it all to us. Very creative my gifted poet friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/30/2023 9:42:00 AM
So very nice to know you enjoyed this, Bill. Thank you so much for your kind words of esteem. Smiles and blessings.
Date: 10/29/2023 11:36:00 PM
Dear talented poet! Whoa! This left me speechless! I cant even begin to praise how this poem made me feel! The colors jewels and descriptive imagery from the very first line until the end left me in awe captivated! I think you really have an artistic mind, and your poetic prowess shines brighter than all the stars and moon and gems you’ve used here! That first line resonated with me strongly! Cus i too am a stargazer and dreamer! Brilliant alliterations, rhymes Fave this is! Truly loved this
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Date: 10/30/2023 9:35:00 AM
I extend my heartfelt thanks for your kind expressions, dear friend. I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this story! I deeply appreciate your lovely compliments and Fave. Blessings.
Date: 10/28/2023 11:48:00 PM
Such a gentle poem. I enjoyed the journey.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/29/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for joining me, and for your appreciation, my friend.
Date: 10/28/2023 6:26:00 AM
Daydreamer and stargazer speaks eloquently in this poem my friend. The moon rocked a mulberry sunset world, with milky stars of my fascination; And sweet songbird tunes filled scarlet skies, in changing colors of revelation--splendid!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/28/2023 3:17:00 PM
Your kind words are very gratifying, my friend. You have my deepest thanks. :)
Date: 10/28/2023 2:38:00 AM
We are all daydreamers and stargazers... you always delight me with your words and leave me in awe... always a story in your poems that flow and rhyme so well... the imagery is always so descriptive... you do these so well.. another excellent write my friend love emerald daytime's echo...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/28/2023 3:12:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words so much, Silent One. It's pure joy to know you enjoyed this tale. Thank you. :)
Date: 10/28/2023 2:00:00 AM
This is one of the best descriptions of sunset, littered with delicious and original alliterations to enhance your subtle vista, Blessings,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/28/2023 3:07:00 PM
Thank you very much for your thrilling remarks. I hope that your weekend is blessed. :)
Date: 10/27/2023 8:50:00 PM
Tons of imagery and comparisons. One can’t help but feel cheery amidst the moon and stars, jewels and mind-blowing colors. …Flamboyant flowers fumed fragrance, as my friends found me on fun Fridays… When flashforward fireflies lit up purple twilight
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/28/2023 3:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for the great pleasure of your appreciation, dear Kim. Your words bring smiles. :)

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