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In the Garden

colour attracts a bee here and there- but fragrance stop it in its tracks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/2/2008 5:20:00 AM
Perfect, Brian - how did I miss this yesterday??? A great visual here, and true to life, what more could you ask of a poem? Brilliant. Love Kristin
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Date: 8/1/2008 1:59:00 PM
now this is with-in my ability to comprehend - great job on this write Brian - God Bless
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Date: 8/1/2008 12:29:00 PM
And that is why I never wear perfume when I go into my garden. This is so true. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/1/2008 8:54:00 AM
Excellent use of this form as each line is executed perfectly and provides great detail Michael
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