In the Fall - Dorian's Five Eight and Five

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~In The Fall~ (Dorian's Five Eight And Five) Summer's almost gone It means that fall will arrive soon And this is just nice Leaves from the trees change Yellow reds browns golden all shades Leaves in the air float In fall all things change Different sounds smells all around Thanksgiving we greet Great food on display Family get together to Celebrate this day In Halloween folks Wear costumes of all kind some are Scary some funny Love Halloween too Night full of fun and playing tricks Kids ask for candy Go out trick or treat Enjoy night imagining ghouls Ghosts vampires witches Fall is great season The weather gets colder and crisp Fall is beautiful! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 July.31.2015 "Dorian's Five Eight And Five" is a poetry style created by Dorian Petersen Potter, Aka ladydp2000.

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/2/2015 9:54:00 AM

An excellence penned ..........A.M.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 8/3/2015 7:50:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly A.M,for stopping by again and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate it a lot:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/1/2015 2:52:00 AM

What a fabulous penned here, your write brought the readers sense to the midst of the fall, I love how you penned this with vivid imagery.............A.M.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 8/1/2015 6:36:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly A.M,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I do appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/31/2015 11:28:00 AM

Hello "D" Dear One, Another exquisitely articulated write for sure. I really like your "Dorian's Five Eight And Five" schema here. Outstanding overview and imagery of Autumn. This means a definite (without a doubt) "7" + FAV from me!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me, and Have a Great Weekend!! "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/31/2015 8:38:00 PM

Hi there again G! Thank you ever so kindly Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I truly appreciate it all, the 7, the fav, and your most wonderful comments as always, my dear friend,G.You're always so kind!I'm so glad to know that you liked my Autumn poem, and also my "Dorian's Five Eight And Five" poetry style, in which I wrote this one.Sending love and prayers to you and Ingrid.Best to you always,G!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you!:)D.