In the Event Of

In the event that I forget
what this poem is about
I refer you now to the birds
outside my window.
They are silent – it is a sound-proof window,
but I want to speak of windows more.
I should have titled this poem ‘Window’
but then the silence and the birds got my attention.

What is a poem - rhetorical unanswerable question, 
yet perhaps they are a silent window,
the words being birds only the eyes
and the heart can hear. Well they could be.

Before he died in the Hospice
my father would gaze out of the same window
everyday.
On the other side of that silent window
horses grazed in a paddock – nothing special.

We both would sit facing that expanse of glass, 
I wondering what to say next,
He nodding and smiling at the horses, 
the green cropped grass - the occasional birds.
Not a sound did they all make
but father was listening and seeing 
what only those close to the center
of silence can see.

I believe the words end here.
In the event of my losing my place
In the ensuing quietus
please look away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wanter Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 2:30 PM
Windows are like that, Erich - very compelling.
Ashford Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Sunlite Wanter, a fine comment and thanks you for the review.
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July 24, 2020 at 11:08 AM
*wow*
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July 25, 2020 at 6:35 AM
I think people just don’t know about you, (you are a brilliant poet) just another name in the cue. Commenting on the work of others will let them know you’re here. Of course I have found a few brilliant poets here that don’t get many views. Maybe it’s just my taste, I am a weirdo amongst weirdos ;), (& maybe you’re so good you intimidate) ~x
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July 24, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Hi PT, I wrote this this morning and as usaual with such things, I felt I was too close to it to make a reasoned judgement on it. So glad it worked for you! Congratulations you and one other are the only commentators of my poems on this site, but quality beats quantity:-) Thanks e
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