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In the End

crimson streaks in a fading sky- slow sun falls below the emerald ________________________ September 21, 2019 Poetry/Crystalline/in the end Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1182-773-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for FFI Blog Series 5, Crystalline sponsor, Brian Strand Podium Placement 1

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Date: 9/27/2019 2:19:00 AM
A colorful image that made me smile.
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Date: 9/22/2019 5:01:00 PM
Just how the fading sun makes us feel...tired mixed with the concoction of the day.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2019 9:00:00 PM
Kim, exactly and we hate to see her go... thanks for visiting !
Date: 9/22/2019 4:24:00 PM
Somber. Quiet. :) Ann
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2019 9:00:00 PM
Ann, thanks for the visit, yes a peaceful time of day!
Date: 9/22/2019 3:21:00 PM
you are really being inspired by him. This is very lovely, Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2019 9:02:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the lovely. Yes, I am learning so much from Brian in these blog challenges !
Date: 9/22/2019 2:55:00 AM
Beautiful :-) x
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2019 9:52:00 AM
Elaine thank you for the beautiful!
Date: 9/21/2019 4:25:00 PM
Then darkness appears and absorbs the night...Nice imagery here...
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2019 8:38:00 PM
Arturo, thanks for the compliment !
Date: 9/21/2019 12:41:00 PM
gorgeous visual....:) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2019 12:44:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the gorgeous, I like that word!

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