In the End - With Darren White

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Walking through cold snow Thoughts wandering as I go Dragging my feet ever slowly Bound for a place I know The snowflakes make it hard to see I’m wishing that you were close to me two sets of footsteps left behind being alone does not set me free On our travels, we shall find Together we make one of a kind If only I could see the end For now, you stay on my mind In our lives we often mend and break, we need that friend that holds us when we need on whom we can depend

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/21/2024 11:50:00 PM

Of course this brings tears to my eyes, :(

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/15/2018 2:28:00 AM

Very nice, great collaboration on a very difficult style of poetry

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/5/2018 12:14:00 PM

Hello White Wolf, I like this poem you and Darren created. I like the last verse the best. Have a nice day my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/1/2018 6:39:00 AM

Big props to this embraceable poem of deep Atlantis dreamy love, WW and Darren. Plus, you talented two collabed on a very difficult poetic form. Rubiayat ain't an easy one to do ... let alone w/another person. Bravo! This is a sterling snow-bird poem. It takes love to another elevated branch level. Great job on a fantastic piece of poetry. Love and best wishes always.