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In the End - With Darren White

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Walking through cold snow Thoughts wandering as I go Dragging my feet ever slowly Bound for a place I know The snowflakes make it hard to see I’m wishing that you were close to me two sets of footsteps left behind being alone does not set me free On our travels, we shall find Together we make one of a kind If only I could see the end For now, you stay on my mind In our lives we often mend and break, we need that friend that holds us when we need on whom we can depend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/15/2018 2:28:00 AM
Very nice, great collaboration on a very difficult style of poetry
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Date: 3/5/2018 12:14:00 PM
Hello White Wolf, I like this poem you and Darren created. I like the last verse the best. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:39:00 AM
Big props to this embraceable poem of deep Atlantis dreamy love, WW and Darren. Plus, you talented two collabed on a very difficult poetic form. Rubiayat ain't an easy one to do ... let alone w/another person. Bravo! This is a sterling snow-bird poem. It takes love to another elevated branch level. Great job on a fantastic piece of poetry. Love and best wishes always.
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Date: 2/16/2018 1:49:00 PM
Buddy love, sweet thoughts,,,
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Date: 2/15/2018 8:51:00 AM
Great collaboration, WW. Good to see you writing again. // Barry
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Date: 2/12/2018 1:24:00 AM
Awesomeness!
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Date: 2/4/2018 2:08:00 AM
Knowing the bond, I know this is not beautiful poetry, is deep and great poetry! I only wish more could see this!
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Date: 2/3/2018 11:34:00 AM
Nicely done, Budgie and Darren. One can feel the longing in the poem. I enjoyed reading you today:)
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:41:00 AM
Very well written a poem it is ... though a shadow of unease ... blue memories are very nice ... roses looking from the trees ...
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:44:00 PM
A sad write! A great collaboration!
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