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In the Dew

A cockcrow at the daybreak The girl opens her tea stall A yolk comes out of egg shell Our love in the dew ________________________________________ April 21, 2017 it's a DoDo kinda day - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Francine Roberts

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Jean Murray

Date: 4/23/2017 4:27:00 PM

Lovely scene to imagine.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/25/2017 5:35:00 AM

Lovely comment to enjoy ...

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 10:22:00 PM

Very nice, Probir, good luck in the contest. ~*

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/23/2017 6:07:00 AM

Thank you, Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/21/2017 11:52:00 AM

I am so sorry I missed this gem of a Dodoitsu my friend, Probir! A 7 my friend and good luck to go with!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/23/2017 6:10:00 AM

You never miss ... me always! ... Thank you so much for coming across a gem ... poor momentary dew, in them ...

Miraj Raha

Date: 4/21/2017 11:13:00 AM

fine dodoitsu Sir. the rules are?

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/23/2017 6:14:00 AM

Thanks ... Rules are so simple ... a 4 line stanza with 7 -7 -7 -5 respective syllable count ... a depth in content ... a dash of humour ... a touch of love ... what else is needed for a poem

Chris Green

Date: 4/21/2017 10:25:00 AM

Nicely done my friend. I tried writing one of these for the contest but was terribly unsuccessful.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/21/2017 10:40:00 AM

Thank you, Chris ... But I refuse to believe that you cannot do it ... I did write contest dodoitsu earlier as well ....