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In the Clouds

grass tickling my neck watching pictures in the sky my own gallery

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Faye Gibson

Date: 8/27/2014 8:28:00 PM

Oh, yes...I did this as a child and still watch the clouds for recognizable shapes. Congrats on this beautiful haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2014 5:18:00 PM

and congrats on your well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2014 5:18:00 PM

Barbara, I was right there with you. And my haiku saw a lamb in the sky!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 5:02:00 AM

Light humor runs through, Barbara. congrats

David Mohn

Date: 8/24/2014 9:43:00 PM

Love this Barbara...congrats

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/24/2014 8:11:00 PM

oh that is a lovely approach! I love watching the clouds making shapes :) grats on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2014 6:47:00 PM

you have painted an incredible picture many congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 4:28:00 PM

Barbara, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 8/24/2014 5:51:00 PM

Thank you my dear..it was a fun contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 3:30:00 PM

Weeeee! I super love the gallery, ending... Barbara, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 8/24/2014 5:51:00 PM

Thank you Linda..a wonderful contest..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2014 4:43:00 PM

sweet one, and exactly the theme i was gonna go with, something to do with those cool pictures in the sky!!

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 8/24/2014 5:52:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...When things were simpler and I was younger..we used to spend hours looking at the clouds.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/26/2014 4:45:00 PM

This is nice work - it might be called a haiku since it is about nature. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/26/2014 5:11:00 PM

I hesitated about the form..still not sure..thanks for stopping by.

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/26/2014 4:32:00 PM

From your passionate jue ju poem to this peaceful poetic senryu poem, now that's a good range to have

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/26/2014 5:12:00 PM

Thank you dear...some days my range is very narrow..if not non-existant...lol

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 7/26/2014 3:55:00 PM

Ah cloud watching and letting the imagination run riot - a favourite old past time of mine whilst travelling. Great haiku ...

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/26/2014 2:21:00 PM

I like it.. I remember long ago as a kid , sitting out at night watching tonight sky dance to its music. For years that was our TV!!!