In the Beginning

in the wake of the
morning, my soul is set free
when listening to the subtle
keys of blowing breeze
and when I see the sun rise
in waves of crimson, orange
and gold, my mind is at ease

 



Third theme in Brian Strand's "Interval" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/3/2010 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Brandee. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 5:56:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are such a great writer… love Leke
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 10/12/2009 5:48:00 PM
I love this write, awe inspiring, apleasure to read, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:14:00 PM
Brandee, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 10:25:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:32:00 AM
Dear Brandee, Congratulation on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. Love lainie
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Brandee. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Brandee.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:48:00 PM
a beautiful picture you've painted here Brandee . very nice!
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Date: 9/15/2009 2:08:00 PM
God speed in the contest. Love the description by use of color. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2009 2:57:00 PM
Excellent Monoku Brandee>>James
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Date: 9/10/2009 12:51:00 PM
This paints such a brilliant picture, Brandee! I haven't read Brians blog yet so I don't fully understand the contest but I would say that this is a beautiful start! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Good luck! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/10/2009 12:36:00 PM
Brilliant colors and a vibrant image -- Awesome work, Brandee! And remember, the soul mate comes when the time is right. It took me a long time, but I'm glad I hung in there. This one was certainly worth the wait and I feel like a schoolgirl in love. I wish you the same joy I feel now! And good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:49:00 PM
what a way to start . a great beginning and good luck with this write....
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Date: 9/9/2009 2:11:00 PM
Nice start here. I don't think I can enter this one as I am going to be gone for part of the entry time. Thank you for commenting on my win and poem. love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2009 5:59:00 AM
What a shining poem Brandee. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2009 5:08:00 AM
Reading your monoku today has been a pleasure. Brian's experimental contest is going to be very interesting! I't already great fun reading what has been written so far. Thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/8/2009 11:43:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my experimental contest Brandeee.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/8/2009 4:08:00 PM
Good use of imagery, capture all in one line. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:51:00 PM
beautiful imagery of the morning sun! Thank you also for your comments on my harvest haiku, it is greatly appreciated! ~Trudy~
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