In the Backyard of My Mind

In the backyard of my mind Grew from a pit I planted a long time ago the simplest of pleasures the serene desire unspoiled, unpretentious, to make of every living day a new leaf of life that would grow and mature on the pit I planted long, long ago; but a tree has no roots and no heart and no soul that grows on a barren land so I sowed yesterday under the cushy canopy lilies and daisies and thistles and sunflowers that will sing to the sun in their whirl of blooming attire the gaily tunes of their merry go round.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/10/2017 6:03:00 PM
Great message. Thanks & Shalom, AD
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/10/2017 8:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment Anil:)
Date: 3/23/2017 7:09:00 PM
Astonishing! What a beautiful craft! You've painted great images in my mind with your carefully selected lines.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/24/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank you for your kind review Adeniji. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 3/23/2017 3:19:00 PM
Dear Anne-Marie. You have outdone yourself here. What a wonderful not to mention beautiful world and place. And yes, through your words you have taken us with you. I love this. Isn't the mind a wonderful thing where we can be anything and be anywhere. The title is fabulous and inspired to which you never strayed. This was a pleasure to read. Well done entirely.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/23/2017 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much for your generous comment Lisa. Yes, the mind is a wonderful thing. I'm really glad I managed to retrieve this one from the backyard of my mind . . . that was my first born ever.
Date: 3/23/2017 8:25:00 AM
This was incredibly beautiful and dream like. I really enjoyed exploring this thought provoking backyard today.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/23/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris. This is actually the first poem I ever wrote in English some 30 years ago. I lost it but the lines stayed with me:)
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