Notes About The Poem

In the Backstreets of My Mind

In the back streets of my mind, I sail 
in a sea of daydreams, my imagination 
is sometimes free to run helter-skelter.
Thoughts of tomorrow haunt me.

It can be tough to navigate through
this head that thinks for me. There are 
often traffic jams in the highway;
the railroad tracks visibly rusty

The footpath gets dark some days
so I walk it with a flashlight. But the days 
are mostly sunny and bright. Memories
always bloom like flowers in spring. 

They also swirl like a tornado 
every now and then. When I rise 
at dawn, a thought runs through 
the backstreet of my mind...

"What's for breakfast?"


Submitted for...
Strand Select F,Any Form ,Any Theme Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date: 02/06/2020

Date written: 09/26/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pettit Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 6:32 AM
This well written descriptive piece deserved to be chosen as a winner. Congratulations.
Ibeh Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you very much, Robert:-)
Kauffman Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Edward! Congratulations on your top placement with such rich images and striking metaphor! And I love the whimsy of the last line that so beautifully contrasts with the rest of the poem.
Ibeh Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:46 AM
Thank you so much, Sam:-)
Drowley Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Edward, Congratulations on your winning poem. Excellent job! David
Ibeh Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Thank you very much indeed:-)
La France Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 9:48 AM
Edward, congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest with this fabulous write _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Thank you, Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Radice Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 8:05 AM
A great read Edward! Congratulations on your top win!
Ibeh Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Gary:-)
Perrin Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 10:19 AM
I like this! I wrote something similar myself called Brain train :-) Sorry you didn’t get it into the contest in time x
Ibeh Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Thank you, Elaine:-) I appreciate it.
Warrior Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Never too late for a great read my friend...save it for another contest...^WW^ :o)
Ibeh Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, WW:-) I'll do just that...
Krutsinger Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:26 AM
It is a wonderful write, would do well in many contests, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:53 AM
I appreciate the vote of confidence, dear Caren:-)
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