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Somebody who wishes to be anonymous created the recitation of my poem for me. It was so nice of him. He used a voice changer device and gave my poem great dark atmosphere!!

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In Strangler's Wood

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Know the author of this poem.

In forest's night, the trees bend low
beneath a slice of half moon’s glow;
          silent shadows waver there,
          chilled by gusts of autumn air.

Quavering, as if afraid,
they fall on stumps from trees decayed.
     Among those stumps the shadows creep
     and shroud a form that seems asleep

Lightning flashes . . . Thunder peals.
A sight forlorn the light reveals -
          a man, quite dead, in woolen coat,
          with scarf of death left on his throat.

The shadows saw, and now they quake,
lone witnesses in murder’s wake.
     They cannot speak, but if they could,
     they’d tell all travelers of the wood:

"We’re not the foe.  It’s one of you
that makes us tremble as we do.
          Although we loom and cause you fear,
          something worse is lurking here."

Then Thunder echoes in accord
as from the sky, cold rain is poured.
     And silent shadows start to shrink
     into a night of blackened ink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Empress Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 9:59 PM
Dear sweet andrea, see this is why you are the queen of soup! And poetry! Is there anything you cant write/ anything you havent written? And still you keep writing in different ways for soupers to enjoy! What i love about this poem is the descriptive nature and the darkness that flows in such eloquence! I must say it is indeed a fave for me from your prolific pen! The last line just is my fave!! Blackened ink! Ahh! You are just amazing!!Congratulations on your win! Well deserved soul aunt
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Thanks, Ink. It is in my top ten. It also won me a chapbook deal with shadowportry, as did Cinder Girl.
Ashley Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 11:58 AM
Dear Andrea, the chilling voice (reminds me of James Earl Jones) reciting your verse enhances the dark atmospheric quality of your imagery. Eerie and intense! Congratulations for your success in Tom's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Thanks so much, dear
Foster Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 5:09 PM
I remember this one, it was good to hear it on audio. Well deserved Andrea congratulations.
Thacker Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 4:41 PM
I'm sorry I'm so late on reading this, Andrea, but this is an amazing poem! It's eerie and dark but beautifully written. Congrats on the win.
Peck Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 1:47 PM
This is just gorgeous, Andrea. It should be entered in a national contest. I'm sure it would win! Very spooky yet beautiful. Congratulations on First place!
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 10:06 PM
Thanks, I entered it years ago in one of Shadowpoetry's annual contests. I think it got a cash win!
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April 24, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Dear Andrea, many congratulations on your very worthy top win with this very dark, eerie and atmospheric read. I listened to the narration and I agree, reminded me of Poe. This is great storytelling. I read it aloud several times - one of your best. I love,’ beneath a slice of half moon’s glow’ ‘ into a night of blackened ink’. It’s a very captivating read with vivid imagery. It’s inspired me to write another darker one soon and I’m glad I had the chance to read it. Well done! Celebratory hugs x
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 12:56 PM
thanks so much
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April 23, 2024 at 8:08 PM
Your storytelling prowess is truly remarkable. From the very first line to the last, I was utterly captivated, drawn into a world of dark enchantment and gothic intrigue. Your immersive tone and dramatic imagery transported me to another realm, while your impeccable meter and flow kept me entranced throughout. This scintillating tale is undoubtedly worthy of the highest acclaim and reward. Well done, indeed.
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Thanks so much, Edward
Cornish Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 6:04 AM
Wonderful artistic story telling in perfect iambic tetrameter - bravo!
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 1:17 PM
thanks, Craig
Miller Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 2:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved to spot
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 1:17 PM
thanks, Terry.
Empress Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Wow! Speechless this is impeccable sweet Andrea! Congratulations on your win! The meter the cadence the depth and wordplay here is absolutely brilliant! A fave for me
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 1:18 PM
thanks, much appreciated, Ink. Did you hear the recording of this. The guy reciting my poem reminds of Vincent Price in an Edgar Allen Poe story!!
Canerdy Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Truly excellent~~a huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved top win, Andrea! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 10:53 PM
Thanks so much, Janice
Volumes Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 3:26 PM
Read it, and it was amazing, then listened to it and it gave me shivers. Brilliance Andrea. Probably the most entertaining work there ever has been on Soup. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Congrats on a well deserved win. Pity it wasn't a trophy contest- it deserved one. ( really gave me a scare when I looked down & saw Milt had commented- Then I realized that you had posted it before) .
Volumes Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 7:17 PM
I am so glad you were able to showcase it again for those like me that had never seen it Andrea, it is truly world class my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:49 PM
thanks so much, dear. Yeah, it would have been amazing to get a trophy. this is one of my personal favorites I ever wrote.
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April 22, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations. Loved this!
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:49 PM
thanks, Karen.
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November 24, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win. So well deserved. All the best ~ Warren
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November 23, 2020 at 3:39 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your great win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
Dutta Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 9:44 PM
CONGRATS to usual Topper.
Watt Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 8:21 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win with this scary tale!
Gaul Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 6:57 PM
Haunting tale well told. A tight rhyme of couplets with a clever close. Congratulations on your top placement. Well deserved.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 3:37 PM
A fave from top to bottom! Congratulations, Andrea!
Brul Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Oh, wow..Congratulations dear Andrea for your awesome BIG WIN!!!!! Excellent piece!
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November 22, 2020 at 2:15 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, the woods can be so beautiful by day, and completely terrifying by night. :-)
Canerdy Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 12:12 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Andrea. Superb!! Janice
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November 22, 2020 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Your poem is well-written, full of powerful images, and brings back many scenes from my past! Good writing. Keep it up!
May Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 8:49 AM
One of your classics Andrea and a fave of mine...Congrats on your win..
Fowler Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 8:11 AM
A dark story beautifully penned Andrea. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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