In Stillness

At last, in the mute of twilight hums I am possessed with silence shaven, whiteness of peace touches the breath melting the morsels of earth’s flesh from soiled, weary shirts: my unzipped body dehydrated from needles of toil, soil, boil. Dear time, be my friend in these hours; the linens of cells are bathed in morning’s sweat and raging howls of a day ache for an ounce honeyed by the balm of a tearing mind... along blades of sky coasting, faint light brushes my dreary lips cradled on a nest like tattered notes unsung. At last, losing the self to the din of night half-dark half-light, I cling to the lingering octave of solitude; the oneness with my crawling skin as I release all the pining from the womb, that in stillness, I taste fresh pulp of life. For Celebrate Life Contest Sponsor: Christy Teas Reposted 5/16/2016
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Roper Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Good write ! ! A 7 ! ! Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:54 PM
I've had the same thing happen to me get poem of the day and either N/A or very low place - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Carmack Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Yeah, I would agree, you got screwed with the HM, but life loves a tragedy, and sometimes, second chances. Congrats on this excellent poem.
Trichet Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Congrats Nette, this is wonderful " I cling to the lingering octave of solitude" - this is sublime...awesome work
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:34 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your HM:-) hugs jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 4:01 PM
Congrats on your beauty being featured as the poem of the week :)
Philibert Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Nice job..readers who like this might like my work too, featured on many sites on the internet, published too in magazines in the US and England
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 9:21 PM
oh thank you soooooo much....being famous must be Swell!
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 5:25 AM
SwI$H! Now THAT is oNe Heck Of a Nette Neat Poet Tree! VERY VERY WORTHY of Poem of the WeEK!~ CongraTZ My linens are bathed in sweat after reading this BURNER again and again , and One more to grow on` ! WOWWWWwww!
Anish Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 8:34 PM
The last line "drives the fingernail into the heart" as was said in reference to the ru'bai. It is fitting for this poem a well. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lindley Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Lord Byron ,Percy Bysshe Shelley, and Keats would have loved this great write my friend!! A gem, a diamond it is ! Congrats on this being chosen for Poem of the Week!!
Lalion Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Undoubtedly, a featured poem deserving its place on this roster. Nette, you have depth! Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Poem of the week - fabulous Nette many congratulations and its well worth another read:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Walker  Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Beautiful Nette... Congrats on poem of the week... Verlena
Gulley Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 8:14 PM
A very perfect write. Enjoyed the read...Sharon G.
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:36 PM
simply exquisite Nette ! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Celestial Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:14 AM
best!
K. Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Reading this was so soothing for me, nette-- comfort and relaxation wrapped in your words-- put in the sound of a babbling brook and I can just get lost. I bet this will place well in the contest-- also maraming salamat sa pagpuri sa sulat ko, naungkat sa 'baul' matapos ang ilang buwan... balik init na kaya! Haay, parang summer ulit?? hugs din & ingat lagi ;)
Horsman Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 7:37 AM
this is classic nette, Keats and co would have loved this as do i...
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work for the contest..Reads like a winning entry to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 7:26 PM
deep and lovely Nette super pen hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:12 PM
beautifully penned excellent piece as always nette
Richards Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:08 PM
your poems are always above and beyond ordinary....this again, is exquisite !
Arana Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Overpowering, gosh. To bear a time of solace and come out from it enlightened is an unfathomable experience. An erudite poem and poet!
Bordner Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Ah, the fresh pulp and wine of mind become sublime.Only the wise cherish the rapture of solitude. Such a pretty poem Nette. J.A.B.
Macmillan Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:56 AM
WOW! Okay, one of my faves of yours. Going into my keepers. LOVE the second verse, each word and its placement PERFECTION. Hope you are well, Soul Sis. Will visit more of your poetry tonight. Our girl is FIGHTING SLEEP and her bedtime is creeping farther into my time. I will have to tug the reigns. She is just lovin' summer. And, truth be told, so am I. PS. Fave line is time be my friend!!!!! Hit me hard, that.
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