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In Stars Above

In stars above, the night is wide, A velvet hush that stirs the trees, The moon begins her silver glide— In stars above. Gentle winds whisper through the leas, The clouds in quiet grace abide, They float like thoughts on twilight seas. Where dreams and darkness coincide, A peace drifts in on evening breeze, The heart lets go of wounds long tied, In stars above.

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Date: 6/16/2025 6:29:00 AM
I love this! The gentle scenery and the melodious flow and the soft rhymes and the beautiful refrain.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/16/2025 3:14:00 PM
Thanks, dear Ma'am Vanya for your lovely comment.
Date: 6/15/2025 7:37:00 AM
The soft flow of each line is truly mesmerising! I love this! We can truly feel when a poem is made from heart. A fave for me! Stay creative po! ^___^ JCB
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/15/2025 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, dear Sister JCB. So grateful that you love this Roundel.

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