In Sleep's Chamber

Far away, over the monstrous gray summits As dusking shadows crept stealthily on, When night had turned more stygian And glow worms had begun throwing flickers of light Like sequins stitched onto a flowing velvet gown, When night sky had turned Into a rare configuration of light and shade When in the west a burning solitary star Like a one man army had valiantly blocked The advance of infiltrating clouds, When cicadas were chanting in shrill monotone, When the breeze whispered sweet nothings in my ear And autumn leaves in strong gale Flew about and nosedived into their ebony bed, When my conscious thoughts evaporated And I was left to linger in a semi stupor, I knew a familiar spirit visiting me unsought With the passion of a lover eager to subdue; Morpheus with the scent of poppy leaves all about him Came to lure my soul to bliss and chill the heat of weary toil. By the indulgent grip of his masculine hands He took me on his wings to uncharted oceans and fairy isles A nocturnal odyssey of conjoined souls, lip locked And finally to his secret chamber for a date Making me swoon in secreted ecstasy! August.14.2022 2022 Marathon Mile .12. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mark Toney

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Date: 9/2/2022 2:14:00 PM
An engaging poem, Valsa. It was filled with great imagery and I like the romance included. I'm finally getting caught up on some of your poetry I've missed in August. Hope to keep up better in September, my dear friend. I'm enjoying reading this afternoon. Have a blessed day! Bill
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Date: 8/14/2022 10:53:00 PM
Dear Valsa, your poem is like a rare fine lace embroidered with a luxurious vista of great beauty. Best for a win.
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Date: 8/14/2022 3:01:00 PM
Valsa, your poetry conjures up beautiful pictures, and I adore it. You direct the reader's attention to the satisfying grasp of a man's hands. Beautiful use of metaphors, as well as some glossy poetry. best for a win.
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Date: 8/14/2022 11:27:00 AM
Best glowworm description yet! Enjoyed!
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Date: 8/14/2022 10:50:00 AM
Such a beautiful write dear Valsa... What lovely imagery throughout... "When in the west a burning solitary star.. like a one man army had valiantly blocked the advance of infiltrating clouds".... Loved this... Best wishes in the contest... Have a lovely blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/14/2022 7:03:00 AM
Your poem brings forth excellent images ---leading to the indulgent grip of masculine hands. Lovely imaginative write, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 8/14/2022 2:48:00 AM
Very imaginative. I love the imagery and and smoot poetry. Best for a win.
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