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In Silence Eat Chocolate Cake

Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake  
When I arise my dessert walks behind in ripple shake

Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan
Contest: 1 rhyming couplet or 1 rhyming triplet

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Debbie Duncan Date: 6/20/2013 4:46:00 PM This is cute,,,, and a winner at that ;} have a great day Sara ;} Login to Reply

Apoorva Patrikar Date: 8/30/2012 7:36:00 AM Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake even if its not for me, its something i'll definitely take!!!! Login to Reply Apoorva Patrikar Date: 8/30/2012 7:36:00 AM you're an amazing composer!

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/29/2012 9:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 8/27/2012 9:51:00 PM Tell me about it! Cake is so.... tasty and has such a bad effects on the waistline. Enjoyable short poem. Love & Peace Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 8/26/2012 12:23:00 PM Oh, to funny..congrats. BG Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/26/2012 6:34:00 AM Oh lovely still giggling congratulations Sara xx Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 8/25/2012 11:25:00 PM I've done that many times....Congratulations friend Sara...Great poet you are. Have a nice day!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/25/2012 9:03:00 PM SARA;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 8/25/2012 7:06:00 PM Congrats on the win with this funny piece! Jag Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 8/25/2012 5:38:00 PM Oh, I am so there... well done. Love your poem. Love the truth in it too. Congratulations on your win. Lee Login to Reply

Joy Wellington Date: 8/25/2012 5:09:00 PM Sara this one pulled a deep belly chuckle from me, but it is true...too much chocolate cake will create ripples in the behind...cool write...congrats on your win. One love. Joy Wells Login to Reply

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 8/25/2012 3:26:00 PM Congrats on your win Sara! Just lovely! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/25/2012 12:49:00 PM I remember this one for sure. BIG congrats. It really appealed to me. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/25/2012 12:20:00 PM Too funny, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/25/2012 11:06:00 AM Thanks for breaking the somber mood ot the other entries. Needed a chuckle. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 8/25/2012 10:20:00 AM Very funny... Congratulations on your win... Terry Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 8/23/2012 11:33:00 AM Hi! my sweet friend, we are with you. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 8/23/2012 9:45:00 AM ha ha..this poem is funny Sara. best wishes in the contest!!! xoxo - Laila Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/22/2012 11:52:00 AM sara!.. love your funny bone... really enjoyed the pleasant mood of this piece.. win it!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/22/2012 9:59:00 AM Oh this is brilliant, Sara, wonderfully funny. Login to Reply

Anthony Nutter Date: 8/22/2012 8:06:00 AM Put a smile on my face, a moment on the lips a lifetime on the hips. Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 8/22/2012 5:07:00 AM I love your sense of humor.. this is a great entry for the contest.. good luck with this gem.. Have a great day! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/21/2012 8:26:00 PM hahahaha. This is WONDERFUL. So clever, and I bet Susan will love it. Login to Reply

Richard Palmer Date: 8/21/2012 5:41:00 PM haha watch those ripple shake,best wishes Sara Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 8/21/2012 4:04:00 PM Sara, in your second line, did you really want to include the word "dessert"? What you have there is the dry place with a lot of sand. It's still a good write. Login to Reply

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