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In Silence Eat Chocolate Cake

Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake When I arise my dessert walks behind in ripple shake Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan Contest: 1 rhyming couplet or 1 rhyming triplet

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/20/2013 4:46:00 PM

This is cute,,,, and a winner at that ;} have a great day Sara ;}

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 8/30/2012 7:36:00 AM

Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake even if its not for me, its something i'll definitely take!!!!

Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 8/30/2012 7:36:00 AM

you're an amazing composer!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2012 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/27/2012 9:51:00 PM

Tell me about it! Cake is so.... tasty and has such a bad effects on the waistline. Enjoyable short poem. Love & Peace Matthew Anish

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2012 12:23:00 PM

Oh, to funny..congrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/26/2012 6:34:00 AM

Oh lovely still giggling congratulations Sara xx

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/25/2012 11:25:00 PM

I've done that many times....Congratulations friend Sara...Great poet you are. Have a nice day!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2012 9:03:00 PM

SARA;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/25/2012 7:06:00 PM

Congrats on the win with this funny piece! Jag

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/25/2012 5:38:00 PM

Oh, I am so there... well done. Love your poem. Love the truth in it too. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/25/2012 5:09:00 PM

Sara this one pulled a deep belly chuckle from me, but it is true...too much chocolate cake will create ripples in the behind...cool write...congrats on your win. One love. Joy Wells

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/25/2012 3:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sara! Just lovely!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2012 12:49:00 PM

I remember this one for sure. BIG congrats. It really appealed to me.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2012 12:20:00 PM

Too funny, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/25/2012 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for breaking the somber mood ot the other entries. Needed a chuckle. Love, Joyce

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/25/2012 10:20:00 AM

Very funny... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/23/2012 11:33:00 AM

Hi! my sweet friend, we are with you. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 8/23/2012 9:45:00 AM

ha ha..this poem is funny Sara. best wishes in the contest!!! xoxo - Laila

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2012 11:52:00 AM

sara!.. love your funny bone... really enjoyed the pleasant mood of this piece.. win it!..:) huggs!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/22/2012 9:59:00 AM

Oh this is brilliant, Sara, wonderfully funny.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 8/22/2012 8:06:00 AM

Put a smile on my face, a moment on the lips a lifetime on the hips.

Cory Long

Date: 8/22/2012 5:07:00 AM

I love your sense of humor.. this is a great entry for the contest.. good luck with this gem.. Have a great day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2012 8:26:00 PM

hahahaha. This is WONDERFUL. So clever, and I bet Susan will love it.

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/21/2012 5:41:00 PM

haha watch those ripple shake,best wishes Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/21/2012 4:04:00 PM

Sara, in your second line, did you really want to include the word "dessert"? What you have there is the dry place with a lot of sand. It's still a good write.