Sara Kendrick Poet Concrete

In Silence Eat Chocolate Cake

Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake  
When I arise my dessert walks behind in ripple shake

Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan
Contest: 1 rhyming couplet or 1 rhyming triplet

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Debbie Duncan June 20, 2013 at 4:46 PM This is cute,,,, and a winner at that ;} have a great day Sara ;}

Apoorva Patrikar August 30, 2012 at 7:36 AM Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake even if its not for me, its something i'll definitely take!!!! Apoorva Patrikar August 30, 2012 at 7:36 AM you're an amazing composer!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2012 at 9:49 AM Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish August 27, 2012 at 9:51 PM Tell me about it! Cake is so.... tasty and has such a bad effects on the waistline. Enjoyable short poem. Love & Peace Matthew Anish

Barbara Gorelick August 26, 2012 at 12:23 PM Oh, to funny..congrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 26, 2012 at 6:34 AM Oh lovely still giggling congratulations Sara xx

Bukang Liwayway August 25, 2012 at 11:25 PM I've done that many times....Congratulations friend Sara...Great poet you are. Have a nice day!!

Poet Destroyer A August 25, 2012 at 9:03 PM SARA;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

S.Jagathsimhan Nair August 25, 2012 at 7:06 PM Congrats on the win with this funny piece! Jag

Lee Ramage August 25, 2012 at 5:38 PM Oh, I am so there... well done. Love your poem. Love the truth in it too. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Joy Wellington August 25, 2012 at 5:09 PM Sara this one pulled a deep belly chuckle from me, but it is true...too much chocolate cake will create ripples in the behind...cool write...congrats on your win. One love. Joy Wells

Vicky Tsiluma August 25, 2012 at 3:26 PM Congrats on your win Sara! Just lovely!

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2012 at 12:49 PM I remember this one for sure. BIG congrats. It really appealed to me.

Kim Merryman August 25, 2012 at 12:20 PM Too funny, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Joyce Johnson August 25, 2012 at 11:06 AM Thanks for breaking the somber mood ot the other entries. Needed a chuckle. Love, Joyce

Terry O'Leary August 25, 2012 at 10:20 AM Very funny... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Bl Devnath August 23, 2012 at 11:33 AM Hi! my sweet friend, we are with you. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

Laila Andresen Mjelde August 23, 2012 at 9:45 AM ha ha..this poem is funny Sara. best wishes in the contest!!! xoxo - Laila

Nette Onclaud August 22, 2012 at 11:52 AM sara!.. love your funny bone... really enjoyed the pleasant mood of this piece.. win it!..:) huggs!

Harry Horsman August 22, 2012 at 9:59 AM Oh this is brilliant, Sara, wonderfully funny.

Anthony Nutter August 22, 2012 at 8:06 AM Put a smile on my face, a moment on the lips a lifetime on the hips.

Cory Long August 22, 2012 at 5:07 AM I love your sense of humor.. this is a great entry for the contest.. good luck with this gem.. Have a great day!

Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2012 at 8:26 PM hahahaha. This is WONDERFUL. So clever, and I bet Susan will love it.

Richard Palmer August 21, 2012 at 5:41 PM haha watch those ripple shake,best wishes Sara

Robert Pettit August 21, 2012 at 4:04 PM Sara, in your second line, did you really want to include the word "dessert"? What you have there is the dry place with a lot of sand. It's still a good write.

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