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weighted with past thoughts a small child against her breast all grown-up; a man 8/22/2018

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Date: 9/20/2018 1:17:00 PM
Hello Eve, children do grow up fast. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/1/2018 4:23:00 PM
Hello Eve, Beautifully done!! Powerful with past thoughts. Superb Work!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 8/23/2018 12:54:00 PM
A touching and tender portrayal of the emotions of motherhood... Beautifully written Eve!
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Date: 8/23/2018 8:57:00 AM
LOve this , Eve, and wanted you to know I am going on a small trip. Hate missing out on even a day here!
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:59:00 AM
That passing of time...that's the way it flees; beautifully penned.
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Date: 8/23/2018 2:20:00 AM
Beautiful, so much said I felt the words "weighted with past thoughts"
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Date: 8/22/2018 10:58:00 PM
Wow, Eve, says so much with so little. Excellent. Viv x
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