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He was winter she was spring His cold ways, an icy sting Her heart wanted to melt him so But he would always make it snow She was summer he was Fall She seldom saw him if at all But on Indian summer days he'd appear When her time to go was near And they would be together for a bit As long as the weather would permit

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Date: 1/25/2024 7:00:00 PM
' They would be together for a bit, as long as the weather would permit. ' Sounds like they weren't meant to be. This cute, clever and so creative. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/25/2024 7:16:00 AM
Charming, passionate, and captivating. It was the perfect rhyming scheme. Have a wonderful day Joseph.
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Date: 1/24/2024 9:23:00 PM
I like it, Joseph. Very clever poetry. Intriguing to read, my friend. Thanks for sharing. Bill
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Date: 1/24/2024 7:25:00 PM
An almost mythological poem. Well done and congratulations.
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Date: 1/24/2024 5:21:00 PM
lovely, romantic, and engaging. The rhyme scheme was ideal. enjoy your evening, Sara
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