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In Ruins

In the puddle of monsoon floods Autumn boughs are quick to erode From the grate of colder evenings Finely whipping each earthen lode. Yet for all I bemoan the end Glowing through lambent summer’s blaze-- Who could not be enthralled by fall Its rain and hued portrait amaze. The slow wilting ‘midst vibrant tints , Now paints an oak tree that loosens A tight grip upon mauve-lined twigs-- O fall…a beauty in ruins! ~ .......................... ~Writing Challenge- Decay-Poetry Contest For Constance La France 9/25/2020
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Wanter Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Absolutely beautiful - and expressive! "..A beauty in ruins." How true!
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 5:33 AM
- Beautiful but sad, Nette :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Lovely canvas you've written, Nette, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Faulkner Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 8:08 PM
The contrasting colors here are so rich and vivid, congratulations on your win in the contest!
Ermine Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 2:32 PM
A marvellous beauty, Nette. I really like lambent, to describe the flashes of sun through emptying branches. Structured so brilliantly, - 'beauty in ruins' strangely has a lot of appeal.! Very high Congratulation for your deserved First Place.
La France Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:40 PM
nette, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, great image too _Constance
Fowler Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:40 AM
So lovely and vivid Nette. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Horsman Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 10:57 PM
O fall a beauty in ruin. Wow that is so powerful nette. Amazing poetry, to my favourites.
Leffanta Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Best seen, not smelled! Aloha! Rico
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 8:46 AM
the slow decay of seasons changing, really nice nette, goodluck
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 7:29 AM
A beauty in ruins indeed--well painted imagery of the changing season, Nette. Beautifully done, as always.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 4:40 PM
This is brilliant and beautiful. I enjoyed it so much and wish you the best in the contest. Happy writing and God bless you
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