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In Realm of Love and Life

In realm of love when passions stirred Song of romance fervent hearts heard In tenor we knew, rhythms that woo, Strummed by music our desires spurred. Oh! how that realm blooms love so true As tunes of warmth birds sing for you, From woods that sway as soft winds blow When moon scripts clues on skyline blue; Of dreamy night that gleamed with glow, Of stars that waltzed to stage our show, When we vowed beneath lambent skies, Sprouts of love~~ shall forever grow; While glance of joy thrills cheery eyes Where love-flame kindles, never dies, And dreams cherished, long to revive, Nights we rejoice, snug in love's prize. On life’s hurdled streets where we drive From wheels of hope strength we derive While we climb steep high ways of life, Hand in hand, we steer fate and thrive. June 1, 2022 Placed 1st: Rubaiyat Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet Eight syllables per line (HMS.com) Rhyme: aaba, bbcb, ccdc, dded, eefe

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Date: 2/22/2023 7:53:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winner. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 6/27/2022 7:44:00 AM
Quite beautiful Vijay. Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 6/18/2022 3:29:00 PM
Yayyy for your win . Congrats, vijay.
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Date: 6/14/2022 8:47:00 PM
As I expected, this has got the first place win. Congratulations, dear Vijay!
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Date: 6/14/2022 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 6/14/2022 1:45:00 AM
Beautiful! Enjoyed from start to finish! Congrats on your win, Vijay
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Date: 6/13/2022 7:34:00 PM
"like a deadly shooter" - Greatest succes of life. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2022 4:20:00 PM
Heartfelt congratulations on your outstanding submission in my contest, Vijay. Blessings and best regards
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Date: 6/11/2022 4:40:00 AM
In this masterpiece Vijay, you have woven, created and spun your love and knowledge of and for nature and by adding an intense amount of your unrivaled romantic flair leave me as always, in awe of of your talented poetry, not for this poem only but for all your superbly crafted poetry you always post. God bless you, Hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 6/8/2022 1:09:00 PM
Vijay this is so crafted in a perfect way. The effort and thought that went into this is outstanding. Your passion, for Poetry is definitely reflected in this piece. Love surely inspired you and through reading this marvelous piece it reflects, from your heart. Be blessed myfriend...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2022 4:48:00 AM
Much appreciate your insightful thoughts, Michael. Many thanks my friend for stopping by with your kind, graceful remarks.
Date: 6/7/2022 12:43:00 AM
A Rubaiyat masterpiece, dear Vijay!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/8/2022 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Elaine--much appreciate.
Date: 6/6/2022 10:31:00 AM
Wow!! Falling short of words to describe its magnificence. This is not just weaving of words, it's a treasury of love and support. Especially the last four lines!! Kudos .
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2022 12:17:00 PM
So very kind of you to say so. Many thanks Swetha, for your visit and comments.
Date: 6/5/2022 2:32:00 PM
You aced this one Vijay, I followed it beat by beat, nicely penned, gl in the contest , :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2022 12:16:00 PM
Nice to hear that from you my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/5/2022 9:18:00 AM
ahhh Vijay what a lovely capture!!! to read this gives the possibilities of the Blue Rose or the realized Chimera....line by line love blooms and what a garden dedicated to Romance....thank you
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2022 12:16:00 PM
Thank you Timothy--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 6/4/2022 5:16:00 PM
WoW! Vijay, You did a fantastic job with the Rubaiyat form. I found it to be a well-written poem about love and life. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend my friend:-)Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2022 12:15:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate, Alexis.
Date: 6/4/2022 4:18:00 PM
Love is supreme, as is your poetry, Vijay. A lovely tribute to both of you and your love. I always enjoy words of love from other's hearts to each other. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2022 12:15:00 PM
Much appreciate, Bill. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 6/4/2022 3:28:00 PM
You did splendidly with this unique poetry form, vijay. Good luck in the contest. I think i still need to post mine!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2022 12:14:00 PM
Nice to hear that from you Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/4/2022 8:04:00 AM
Beautifully penned Vijay, Best for a top win
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2022 8:27:00 AM
Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.
Date: 6/4/2022 5:42:00 AM
Vijay….you are so clever with words and write with such eloquence….just lovely! Debx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2022 8:26:00 AM
Glad you stopped by with your insightful comments, Deb. Many thanks.
Date: 6/3/2022 10:24:00 PM
Missed seeing this lovely poem. "Oh! how that realm blooms love so true/As tunes of warmth birds sing for you, From woods that sway as soft winds blow/ When moon scripts clues on skyline blue"; Nature and love combined has effected a celestial feel that you alone can create. Best for a top win ....
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2022 8:25:00 AM
Always a delight to read your eloquent comments, Valsa. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/3/2022 7:19:00 AM
Awesome poetry, Vijay, love the form, and your words enhance the whole thing.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2022 12:43:00 PM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 6/2/2022 11:27:00 AM
Nature and romantic emotions combine to make a most lovely Rubaiyat, Vijay. ~ Best regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2022 12:02:00 PM
Much appreciate Paul--many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 6/2/2022 8:42:00 AM
Romantic and dreamy! The way that love should be! You’ve made our day, Vijay…sigh!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2022 12:01:00 PM
Glad you liked the dreamy part my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Kim.
Date: 6/2/2022 3:33:00 AM
Vijay, your marvelous connection with nature always shines in your poetry. This is another beauty I am sure will fair well in the contest. Very lovely my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2022 4:30:00 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Connie. Always appreciate your valued opinion my friend. Many thanks.
Date: 6/1/2022 8:14:00 PM
Many emotions are brought out when reading this well thought piece Vijay. Im sure it will rank up there in placement my friend...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2022 4:29:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate.
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