Vijay Pandit Poet Rubaiyat

In Realm of Love and Life

In realm of love when passions stirred
Song of romance fervent hearts heard
In tenor we knew, rhythms that woo,
Strummed by music our desires spurred.

Oh! how that realm blooms love so true
As tunes of warmth birds sing for you,
From woods that sway as soft winds blow
When moon scripts clues on skyline blue;

Of dreamy night that gleamed with glow,
Of stars that waltzed to stage our show,
When we vowed beneath lambent skies,
Sprouts  of  love~~  shall   forever  grow;

While glance of joy thrills cheery eyes
Where love-flame kindles, never dies,
And dreams cherished, long to revive,
Nights we rejoice, snug in love's prize.

On life’s hurdled streets where we drive
From wheels of hope strength we derive
While we climb steep high ways of life,
Hand in hand, we steer fate and thrive.

June 1, 2022
Placed 1st: Rubaiyat Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
Eight syllables per line (HMS.com)
Rhyme: aaba, bbcb, ccdc, dded, eefe

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Sara Kendrick February 22, 2023 at 7:53 AM Back with congratulations on this winner. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler June 27, 2022 at 7:44 AM Quite beautiful Vijay. Congratulations! Linda

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2022 at 3:29 PM Yayyy for your win . Congrats, vijay.

Valsa George June 14, 2022 at 8:47 PM As I expected, this has got the first place win. Congratulations, dear Vijay!

Paula Goldsmith June 14, 2022 at 9:40 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Unseeking Seeker June 14, 2022 at 1:45 AM Beautiful! Enjoyed from start to finish! Congrats on your win, Vijay

Christuraj Alex June 13, 2022 at 7:34 PM "like a deadly shooter" - Greatest succes of life. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet June 13, 2022 at 4:20 PM Heartfelt congratulations on your outstanding submission in my contest, Vijay. Blessings and best regards

Jennifer Proxenos June 11, 2022 at 4:40 AM In this masterpiece Vijay, you have woven, created and spun your love and knowledge of and for nature and by adding an intense amount of your unrivaled romantic flair leave me as always, in awe of of your talented poetry, not for this poem only but for all your superbly crafted poetry you always post. God bless you, Hugs Jennifer.

Michael Tor June 8, 2022 at 1:09 PM Vijay this is so crafted in a perfect way. The effort and thought that went into this is outstanding. Your passion, for Poetry is definitely reflected in this piece. Love surely inspired you and through reading this marvelous piece it reflects, from your heart. Be blessed myfriend... Vijay Pandit June 10, 2022 at 4:48 AM Much appreciate your insightful thoughts, Michael. Many thanks my friend for stopping by with your kind, graceful remarks.

Elaine George June 7, 2022 at 12:43 AM A Rubaiyat masterpiece, dear Vijay!!! Vijay Pandit June 8, 2022 at 6:40 AM Thank you Elaine--much appreciate.

Swetha Vangaveti June 6, 2022 at 10:31 AM Wow!! Falling short of words to describe its magnificence. This is not just weaving of words, it's a treasury of love and support. Especially the last four lines!! Kudos . Vijay Pandit June 6, 2022 at 12:17 PM So very kind of you to say so. Many thanks Swetha, for your visit and comments.

Mystic Rose Rose June 5, 2022 at 2:32 PM You aced this one Vijay, I followed it beat by beat, nicely penned, gl in the contest , :) Vijay Pandit June 6, 2022 at 12:16 PM Nice to hear that from you my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Timothy Ray June 5, 2022 at 9:18 AM ahhh Vijay what a lovely capture!!! to read this gives the possibilities of the Blue Rose or the realized Chimera....line by line love blooms and what a garden dedicated to Romance....thank you Vijay Pandit June 6, 2022 at 12:16 PM Thank you Timothy--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Alexis Y. June 4, 2022 at 5:16 PM WoW! Vijay, You did a fantastic job with the Rubaiyat form. I found it to be a well-written poem about love and life. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend my friend:-)Alexis Vijay Pandit June 6, 2022 at 12:15 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate, Alexis.

Bill Baker June 4, 2022 at 4:18 PM Love is supreme, as is your poetry, Vijay. A lovely tribute to both of you and your love. I always enjoy words of love from other's hearts to each other. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill Vijay Pandit June 6, 2022 at 12:15 PM Much appreciate, Bill. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.

Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2022 at 3:28 PM You did splendidly with this unique poetry form, vijay. Good luck in the contest. I think i still need to post mine! Vijay Pandit June 6, 2022 at 12:14 PM Nice to hear that from you Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May June 4, 2022 at 8:04 AM Beautifully penned Vijay, Best for a top win Vijay Pandit June 4, 2022 at 8:27 AM Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.

Deb M June 4, 2022 at 5:42 AM Vijay….you are so clever with words and write with such eloquence….just lovely! Debx Vijay Pandit June 4, 2022 at 8:26 AM Glad you stopped by with your insightful comments, Deb. Many thanks.

Valsa George June 3, 2022 at 10:24 PM Missed seeing this lovely poem. "Oh! how that realm blooms love so true/As tunes of warmth birds sing for you, From woods that sway as soft winds blow/ When moon scripts clues on skyline blue"; Nature and love combined has effected a celestial feel that you alone can create. Best for a top win .... Vijay Pandit June 4, 2022 at 8:25 AM Always a delight to read your eloquent comments, Valsa. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Harry Horsman June 3, 2022 at 7:19 AM Awesome poetry, Vijay, love the form, and your words enhance the whole thing. Vijay Pandit June 3, 2022 at 12:43 PM Thank you Harry--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Paul Callus June 2, 2022 at 11:27 AM Nature and romantic emotions combine to make a most lovely Rubaiyat, Vijay. ~ Best regards // paul Vijay Pandit June 2, 2022 at 12:02 PM Much appreciate Paul--many thanks for your visit and comments.

Kim Rodrigues June 2, 2022 at 8:42 AM Romantic and dreamy! The way that love should be! You’ve made our day, Vijay…sigh! Vijay Pandit June 2, 2022 at 12:01 PM Glad you liked the dreamy part my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Kim.

Connie Marcum Wong June 2, 2022 at 3:33 AM Vijay, your marvelous connection with nature always shines in your poetry. This is another beauty I am sure will fair well in the contest. Very lovely my friend. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit June 2, 2022 at 4:30 AM So very kind of you to say so, Connie. Always appreciate your valued opinion my friend. Many thanks.

Michael Tor June 1, 2022 at 8:14 PM Many emotions are brought out when reading this well thought piece Vijay. Im sure it will rank up there in placement my friend... Vijay Pandit June 2, 2022 at 4:29 AM Thank you my friend for your visit and kind remarks. Much appreciate.

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