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In Presence Dwells Absence - A Midnight Manifesto

~in presence dwells absence dialectic tangle empty mind inscribe upon cerebral core edges sculpted troubadour delicate ghost print under water wane into the emptiness ether spectre knot, hand of death upon fickle heart digress all the same… ~in absence dwells presence dare we undo the dark yet done as it presses under curtain midnight sun the shimmer on the lake where dancing, beasts in hunger sway unlocking clock clutched in bleak winter day into the morrow, under heavy tread suffocate lest in absence ever there in presence despair all the same… ~in presence dwells absence spectre now, humble muse hunter the hand trembles though no breeze haunts it is where less is more and the moon has yet to shed her song there is harmony though the notes are wrong between darkness and memory split the night dispossess the parasite purge the venom from my skull and give me proper burial

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Date: 1/31/2024 12:27:00 PM
Powerful diction, 'here but not here'- 'give me a proper burial' heavy writing, dark and beautiful
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/1/2024 7:59:00 AM
thank you paige - my gratitude
Date: 1/25/2024 12:05:00 PM
Your poem is a profound meditation on the enigmatic nature of existence, navigating the liminal spaces between presence and absence, light and darkness, life and death. Through its evocative imagery, lyrical language, and existential themes, it invites readers to embark on a contemplative journey of introspection and self-discovery...
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/25/2024 12:59:00 PM
thank you for the reply - regards
Date: 1/25/2024 9:46:00 AM
delicate ghost print under water wane … purge the venom from my skull…Very descriptive!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/25/2024 9:56:00 AM
thank you for the visit
Date: 1/24/2024 8:54:00 PM
Wow, I'm awake in the middle of the night reading this and the word play is mesmerising! I love how it all feels the first time these things have been said - so many fantastic expressions that cause you to linger.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/24/2024 9:02:00 PM
thank you - glad this caught you in the depth of night

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