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In Praise of Washing Dishes

With hands immersed in suds and water warm, I stand before the sink, humbled vassal, To plates and dishes, grease and grime the norm, My task to cleanse this polychromed passel. Each cup I cradle with a gentle pinch, Their curves and corners, every angle blessed, Rinse them speckless, my soapy palm a winch, A chore completed, my service at rest. For though this labor at face is mundane, It's in the simple things we find our grace, And so I wash each dish with grateful strain, And let their gleaming surfaces erase The chaos and the clutter of the day, A small but satisfying task, I say.

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Date: 4/5/2023 7:40:00 AM
Nice writing,Simple tasks that must be done. Very fun!
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Date: 3/28/2023 9:29:00 PM
doing own work by self is a great deal of life and it's great job; nice to read; congrats for POTD
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Date: 3/28/2023 2:37:00 PM
Ahh sonnets - too tricky for me. Well done on your POTD. You definitely need a trophy cabinet :)
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Date: 3/27/2023 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Jaymee! Love the imagery, wordsmithing and alliteration! Love the phrase: my soapy palm a winch!
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Date: 3/24/2023 3:46:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem you wrote ! :) Great job :)
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Date: 3/23/2023 11:20:00 PM
Great poem, the joy of completing a task! Congratulations on your honor of POTD!
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Date: 3/23/2023 8:16:00 PM
It's in the simple things we find our grace, your poem did it , a perfect and touching write, bravo for the nominate
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Date: 3/23/2023 7:00:00 PM
Jaymee, I agree, washing dishes can be rewarding, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 3/23/2023 4:49:00 PM
Your thoughts are very entertaining. :) I can't wait to get my hands in the warm, soapy water and clean those dirty dishes. Congratulations Jaymee, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/23/2023 2:20:00 PM
It’s such a satisfying feeling when the house is nice and tidy. Congratulations on your POTD, Jaymee. :)
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:12:00 PM
Jaymee, a wonderfully penned Sonnet, I enjoyed it so much, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/23/2023 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Jamyee! You have taken a simple daily task and turned it into a POTD elevating this simple task into the realm of metaphoric wonder. Wonderful work. I remember washing dishes with family as a child. It is one of my most enduring and endearing memories of family! Blessings.
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Date: 3/23/2023 10:58:00 AM
Even some bachelors, no doubt, can identify and appreciate this piece, Jaymee, and applaud its selection as POTD.
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Date: 3/23/2023 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Jaimee Thomas! You are most inspiring and your “Four Cafés” Avant-garde, I agree with Mystic Rose, on “Sacred Cats” your imagination has taken poetry to a new level. I Am Anaya
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Date: 3/23/2023 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely/fun write and way to look at washing dishes. Have a blessed day as you wash away.................
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Date: 3/23/2023 8:46:00 AM
Dear Jaymee, I smiled as I read your sonett. It is so well constructed and the transition to the concluding verses was very clever. My GE diswasher may not be as impressed. - Best - Ken
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Date: 3/23/2023 7:58:00 AM
Really enjoyed your POTD, Jaymee. It seems to me that ours is certainly not to deprecate, but rather to elevate (!) To find the holiness in even the 'most mundane' of tasks. Congrats to you!
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Date: 3/23/2023 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jaymee. I like your seniments put into my favorite form of poetry, the Sonnet. :-) Enjoy your special day! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 3/23/2023 7:29:00 AM
I like looking out the window in front of the sink or opening it for the breeze in the spring for the task. Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 3/23/2023 6:48:00 AM
Agreed Jaymee - small pleasures. And the heat feels good on arthritic hands I'm told. :) Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 3/23/2023 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Really enjoyed your loving and caring poem - it's a chore every day, but I like this simple task - standing in front of the sink, I watch outside nature through the window, and feel relaxed! Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/23/2023 4:49:00 AM
Dawn gets the job done!, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 3/23/2023 4:48:00 AM
back with congratulations Jaymee on POTD honors:) Great job!
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Date: 3/23/2023 4:24:00 AM
The value is not in what we do.....but in how we do it. Great sonnet and a final couplet that will become a mantra for dishwashers everywhere.
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Date: 3/23/2023 4:09:00 AM
"It's in the simple things we find our grace" - Well said. And, you have composed a very beautiful poem on the simple day-to-day act of dish-washing. Wonderful work! Congratulations!
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