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IN PLAIN SIGHT Christ walks within and willingly travails. We are no longer dead, but made brand new. We are his hands and feet, infused with nails. The cross in view, his resurrection too. Follow the arteries and veins, to boast. Not of yourself, it is the heart of Christ. When you see eyes of gold, the Holy Ghost, a pupil’s source - a work of God, sufficed. His still small voice - not, booming loud, thunder - found in bible and all around the church. He speaks within, without - a great wonder. We are the church - love like doves, kneel-perch. Is God hiding? If so, He’s in plain sight. Let darkness flee. Dear friends, embrace the light. 8/22/2022 Contest: Where is God hiding SPONSOR: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 8/23/2022 7:33:00 AM
I especially like the last line. He was there all the time, waiting patiently in line. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/23/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! I appreciate you! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/22/2022 3:46:00 PM
Kim, This is just great! I do know this is a winner. How can it not be? “Let Darkness flee, embrace the light!” Awesome, Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2022 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Pangie!
Date: 8/22/2022 11:23:00 AM
What a lovely religious poem. Great sonnet full of imagery. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2022 2:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Victor!
Date: 8/22/2022 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful write Kim, We are saved by his blood...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/22/2022 2:11:00 PM
Yes, we are! Thank you, Joseph!

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