In My Pyramid of Crystal

I crawl into my pyramid of crystal; beside a singing lake of sunlit waters. I meditate here as the lovely notes call; I watch the wildflowers dance with their partners. Upon sharp ears do golden water-notes fall; in this place of beauty where I seek answers. Bright golden waves whisper to souls in the light; "come drink"; I breathe in all these wonderful sights.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/12/2019 12:31:00 PM
I have read your short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/12/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara.
Date: 2/6/2019 7:03:00 PM
Belated Congratulations on your win, M.L. An exquisite Rispetto!! So Splendid and enjoyable.. Have a blessed evening!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/6/2019 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/5/2019 12:51:00 AM
Kudos on your first Rispetto M.L.! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/5/2019 11:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, Connie.
Date: 2/4/2019 12:25:00 PM
M.L., you have some unique and interesting images in your lovely Rispetto. I wasn't sure what the "pyramid of crystal" was, but liked your description of golden water notes. It was very difficult for me to judge this contest because contestants wrote so many incredibly beautiful poems. It's my hope that all of them will regard their entries as wonderful "stand-alone" poems. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/4/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, I am surprised that I placed; I'd never written one of these before.
Date: 2/3/2019 9:23:00 PM
Absolutely lovely, ML.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/4/2019 4:09:00 AM
Oh, thank you.
Date: 2/3/2019 9:06:00 PM
This is peaceful and beautiful with amazing imagery M.L. A gorgeous entry! xxoo : )
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/4/2019 4:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, I'd never tried a Rispetto before.
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