In My Life's Peaceful Interlude

In My Life’s Peaceful Interlude

Midlife for me was a peaceful interlude.
After my children left the nest,
there had been a climax of sorts.
Poetry had come; it flowed to me.
I’d spend long afternoons in sun’s warm glow,
happily attacking sheets of paper with my pen.
In my life’s interlude, I felt formidable -
as though I could live another fifty years. . .
and all would be well.
How I wish this feeling were immutable!

One evening visiting a nursing home,
I beheld an elderly lady sitting demurely at a table.
Her image was a graceful sketch in grey
which imprinted itself indelibly on my mind.
As she sat, so well-composed, although her hands trembled,
I noticed her frailty and how brittle her old bones had to be,
yet there she sat, this aged woman, lighting up the room
as she smiled at me!

I have always felt life to be tenuous,
but examples of that are coming faster now
as my old friends and acquaintances vanish from the earth.
Trials of my own have now assailed me,
and still I write and wonder. . .
Should I somehow manage to live a century
as that old woman surely had done,
and should I become bereft
from the inevitable losses the future is sure to bring me,
might I sit and manage as gracefully as she
a brightly lit-up smile for a passer-by?

Nov. 3, 2017 for John Hamilton's 'Eight word challenge -5' Poetry Contest
Words used in the poem: 1. Brittle 2. Immutable 3. Formidable 4. Tenuous 5. Interlude 6. Sketch 7. Bereft 8. Demurely

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/12/2017 9:26:00 PM
Not if you're like my Mother, I'm sure it wasn't her you saw. This is TENDER, touching and universally applicable. It's touch on the bittersweet feel aging brings will stay with me for awhile. This one grabs, Andrea, it ponders a wonderment that can be no less than deeply personal. Excellent. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 11/10/2017 9:03:00 AM
nostalgic... poetry is a feeling that "oh...God...this is me ..."
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Date: 11/9/2017 4:39:00 AM
You expressed so well what we feel. A decade flies so fast, that a century-old person is very young, since it's only ten times that. A withered rose in a vase is still a newly-blossomed flower.
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:36:00 AM
all I can say, is this resonates with me now, very much so, loved it!
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Date: 11/4/2017 4:17:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Andrea. Deep, thoughtful, tender and touching. With your skill, the required words were all used so seemlessly. Excellent! Congratulations on your placement!!
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:13:00 AM
Very inspiring
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Date: 11/4/2017 10:02:00 AM
Back to congratulate you Andrea...
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Date: 11/4/2017 8:27:00 AM
Well done and congrats on your placement, and on the insight you showed in this tender write.
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Date: 11/4/2017 5:48:00 AM
What a beautiful write my friend! you have masterfully used all the words in a fashion that makes it seem flawless and timeless! I surely loved your incredible poem this morning! You have delved into a subject that entered everyone's mind at some point or another...will I live to be 100...or do I want to live to be 100? I don't know if I want to, but when the time comes that I'm getting older and older I would change my tune, I of course would want to live! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/4/2017 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea: I know exactly what you are describing. I have worked with the elderly and feel the same way about many of their good attitudes despite illness. Thanks for expressing it in your lovely words.
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Date: 11/4/2017 5:36:00 AM
Andrea, I enjoyed this very much. Congrats on your win. Well done. John
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Date: 11/4/2017 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your great win. You are flooded with comments. Mine may be redundant.
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Date: 11/3/2017 11:38:00 PM
Smiles always good to see! Nice take on growing older. Writing helps -doesn't it? I posted one about postcard show I went to today. Hope you like it!! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/3/2017 9:59:00 PM
Coming back with congrats!
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Date: 11/3/2017 8:39:00 PM
Well Andrea you did it again, another win with a very touching poem, congrats on a fine shared win!
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Date: 11/3/2017 7:22:00 PM
Hello Andrea, I hope your entry does well in the contest,as this is a wonderful poem and a beautifully written story, It is always quite difficult to write naturally with the constraints of having to include certain words, John did not make it easy. It seems to have come very naturally to you, enjoyed the read, kind regards, Kevin xx
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Date: 11/3/2017 6:51:00 PM
This is lovely, Andrea. Not sure I want to live to one hundred, because that would mean losing so many loved ones. Good luck in the contest - I loved that the mandated words were seamlessly woven into your story.
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Date: 11/3/2017 3:36:00 PM
Yes, I think if anyone could still light up the room with a smile for others at age 100, it would be you. Awesome poem, a favorite for me.
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Date: 11/3/2017 2:50:00 PM
Very deep reflections, you did a wonderful job using those words..
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Date: 11/3/2017 2:29:00 PM
Very well done Andrea, here's to the century club...
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Date: 11/3/2017 2:27:00 PM
I imagine that you will Andrea. I enjoyed this very much. You eloquently bent the words to your will.
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Date: 11/3/2017 2:02:00 PM
ohh, so beautifully expressed, andie... keep on writing, it's your forte!... huggs
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Date: 11/3/2017 1:38:00 PM
I sure hope you do and continue to write as well.
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Date: 11/3/2017 1:31:00 PM
Lovely story Andrea--love the way you got the eight words in so smoothly and naturally with the flow of the poem--best for win!
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