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and in my green dream, I find myself in a green lush forest dripping wet with life, steamy and sultry I am one with nature and with the emerald drifting water oh, the chartreuse moss and the wet lime green ferns I float in tranquility and beneath me seaweed grows, swaying so many greens all united in harmony juniper, sage, olive, shamrock, pine emerald green of a little frog and the dark green of a crocodile small green fish kissing my toes a lovely green flower, a green snake slithers a fluttering green butterfly, a green bird sings sweetly green twining vines, meandering in the dark green foliage my sage green eyes, whisper come fall into the green depths with me I will take you to green, green world full of utter peace all beautiful shades of green, mingled and entwined, united in nature and life __________________________ February 29, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/in my green dream Copyright Protected, ID 16-762-889-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, United Colors: Green sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 6/19/2020 9:58:00 AM
Reread this one, so lovely.
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Date: 4/20/2020 7:39:00 AM
Loved the lusciousness of this poem bubbling with life.
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Date: 4/20/2016 4:19:00 PM
..."small green fish kissing my toes" made me smile. Thanks. I'm going to Costa Rica next week to experience the rain forests for the first time. Reading this poem is perfect timing. ~Brett
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:19:00 AM
Brett, I liked that line too, have fun in the rainforest
Date: 3/14/2016 10:47:00 PM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2016 8:51:00 AM
Linda, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and love ~
Date: 3/7/2016 7:47:00 AM
Enchanting!!! I love it!!! Congrats on your well, deserved top placement in the contest BW!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/7/2016 7:58:00 PM
Teddy thanks for visiting with the enchanting and the congrats ~
Date: 3/6/2016 11:20:00 AM
I was there with you, hidden in your sea of green dreams! Great work, Broken Wings!! Congratulations on you win!!
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:39:00 PM
Sarita, thanks for visiting my poem with the nice comment and congratulations !!
Date: 3/3/2016 11:52:00 PM
Taking all readers to where greens galore. Congratulations....
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Date: 3/4/2016 12:42:00 AM
Probir, thanks so much for the nice comment and the congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 3/3/2016 7:00:00 PM
I'm green with envy reading your amazing green dream:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/4/2016 1:52:00 AM
Jan, thanks so much for the amazing, the congrats and the hugs !!!
Date: 3/3/2016 12:08:00 PM
A wonderful interpretation of the contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/3/2016 4:21:00 PM
Joyce, thanks for visiting with the wonderful, the congratulations and love !!!
Date: 3/3/2016 7:55:00 AM
great green win congrats
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Date: 3/4/2016 2:00:00 AM
Stephen, thanks for visiting the green with congrats !
Date: 3/2/2016 9:24:00 PM
Floating on your dream, Constance. Congrats on your very well deserved top spot win. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/2/2016 9:35:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting with the congrats and the nice comment, appreciate !
Date: 3/2/2016 8:42:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, Fabulous poem--it sets a very enchanting scene, with language as lush as the realm it describes. Well done! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:46:00 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting with that amazing comment and the congratulations !!
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:44:00 PM
Oh--and huge congrats on your outright, first place win--Dang!
Date: 3/2/2016 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on podium tops, Constance. The work is well deserved, was a delight to read the piece. Well done.
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:43:00 PM
Sam, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the compliments !
Date: 3/2/2016 6:58:00 PM
Wonderful, green of peace. Congratulations on 1st place win
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Date: 3/2/2016 7:49:00 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting with the wonderful and the congratulations !
Date: 3/2/2016 5:14:00 PM
Hi Broken, another peaceful dream you have laid before us. A wonderful top win in the contest. A sublime dream of green. A seven and into my faves. This write sings in its gentility....Vlad.
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Date: 3/2/2016 6:02:00 PM
Vlad, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment and the 7 and fav !!!
Date: 3/2/2016 5:11:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win in the 'Green' contest! Great poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/2/2016 6:05:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the comment and hugs !!!
Date: 3/2/2016 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations! Job well done...Charlie
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:47:00 PM
Charlie, thanks so much for visiting with the congratulations and the compliment !
Date: 3/2/2016 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:32:00 PM
Janice, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the compliment !!
Date: 3/2/2016 4:29:00 PM
Extremely beautiful, Constance, and so deserving of your first place win. Elaine
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:36:00 PM
Elaine thanks for the beautiful and the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 3/2/2016 4:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win it is a well deserved one your take on green was perfect
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:28:00 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting with the congrats and compliment !
Date: 3/2/2016 3:40:00 PM
That's mega! Congrats on your placement. You deserve the top place.
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:00:00 PM
Rhoda, thanks for the mega and the congratulations, so appreciated !
Date: 3/2/2016 3:36:00 PM
Awesome, Constance, top of the list!! Congrats to you.
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:11:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the awesome and the congrats !!
Date: 3/2/2016 3:12:00 PM
BW, congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:15:00 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the congrats !
Date: 3/2/2016 11:02:00 AM
Getting in to this color stuff, BW, you should do a color series. This is beautiful.
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Date: 3/2/2016 12:23:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Date: 3/2/2016 10:11:00 AM
This made me take a deep breath and I imagined I was there. A gorgeous piece.
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Date: 3/2/2016 12:32:00 PM
Richard, thanks for the nice comment, and the gorgeous, appreciate !
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