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In My Garden

In My Garden Fire burning in my soul churning with the growing old longing for your lips so fine. Flowers hang from tender vines in my garden? I’ve learned the way to find the love you may have never known in valleys of surrender filled with quiet you’ll remember in my garden. Lustful desire is all abloom as I sing my siren's tune. But to hear this song I've sung you must not hesitate to come in my garden. Baby, sweetheart, honeypie let me lick away the cry and take you to the other side where we can bide and softly glide in my garden. A deep, fond ecstasy is there for both of us to equally share two people breathing night's sweet air with moments of pleasure truly rare in my garden 9/20/17

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Date: 11/29/2018 3:41:00 AM
Very nicely done, Janis - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/26/2018 11:09:00 PM
Nicely done, Janis, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/26/2018 1:40:00 PM
Very sensual garden you've got, congratulations!
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Date: 11/26/2018 3:56:00 AM
Very sexy and love the garden imagery. Congrats!
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:16:00 AM
- Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 11:29:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Janis.
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Date: 2/24/2018 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janis. Well done.
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Date: 2/24/2018 1:49:00 PM
Hot stuff, Janis, congrats! Viv x
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Date: 2/23/2018 10:20:00 AM
loved the repeating lines "in my garden" brought so much joy to the poem, loved this...thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 2/22/2018 12:21:00 AM
Awesome rhyme you have up there. I have one called Secret Garden :) favs
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/22/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Debbie. I tried to put a video with it but found it to be a bit to risqué.
Date: 12/9/2017 3:52:00 PM
So beautifully written with the art of poetic fire, Janis. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/22/2018 2:22:00 PM
I like your use of the term poetic fire. You can definitely refer to that one later on somehow. Thanks for the comments.
Date: 12/8/2017 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this gorgeous pen! xomo
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:21:00 AM
Sensual and lovely! Congrats, Janis!
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Date: 12/7/2017 11:42:00 PM
This was sublimely sexy and sensual, Janis, and so expertly penned, with exquisite imagery and metaphor, and such a smooth, easy flow. Congratulations on FOURTH PLACE, and thank you for your patience! :-) <3
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Date: 9/24/2017 1:07:00 PM
This poem perfectly fits the theme presented by the sponsor, Janis. The poetic fire of desire burns with sensual intensity. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 9/21/2017 6:40:00 AM
This is so beautifully written Janis.. Sensual, deep and emotive and full of wonderful imagery...
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:24:00 AM
- This feeling you describe sank deep into my mind and shaped my feeling of beauty, Janis - Beautiful ... full of romance :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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