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In My Darkest Hour

Days go by Without a word Cool whispers of the wind Grace upon bloodshed skin A dark lonely tower A soul sent to die One swing of deaths black sword A blow such can not tend A price for an immortal sin I will not cower Nothing to hold his lie One to call the lord One last prayer to send This devil shall not win Not even with all of his power There is no reason as to why The belly of the beast hath roared One last favor to lend Hiding within the beasts den In my darkest hour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Taylor I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Taylor. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:00:00 PM
Another great poem with fine descriptiveness and rhyming. One little item needs correction: At the end of the second line in your last verse, your word "roured" should be spelled "roared". Everything else looks just fine.
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Date: 1/28/2011 1:52:00 PM
I enjoyed this piece. I like how you ended it. Take care -Mike
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