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5/14/2025 for Memorial Day Poetry Contest sponsored by Oliver McKeithan 

In Memory

my father is no longer here
but I still have memories 
like the letters from his high school buddies
in the armed forces
at the tail end of World War 2.
these letters, thankfully, were saved by my grandmother
he missed his senior year 
to learn how to fly an airplane for the war with Japan
Hitler had been defeated
but not yet Tojo
I'm lucky Dad wasn't a few years older
and he wasn't deployed in Normandy
he never saw any action
because the war ended 
but he was ready
we disagreed about many things
but I'd rather be sitting with him now
than with anyone in the world
what I love about these letters 
even though they were to (not from) him
is that they reflect
the time in history
and show
the love his friends had for him
which I understand
because I know my dad
and I can feel the humor
and the camaraderie
in those words
written in the individual scrawls
of the young servicemen 
who, at the time
I would think of now
as young boys
they were proud to do their duty
and anxious to come home
and begin the business of young men
education, recreation
friends, family
and then
business, courtship, marriage, and children
I like to think of my dad
as a young man
full of fun
health and vigor
I know he was proud of his service
it meant something to him
it means something to me
and he means something to me - 
a lot
here's to you Dad
and to the ones who weren't so lucky
in memoriam
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Kauffman Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 11:01 AM
David, what a moving tribute to your dad who didn't see action but was ready to serve. His attitude of service runs through your lines and is so inspiring. Love your musings about him as a young man "full of fun!" Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you!
Crandall Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 4:01 PM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate it!
Mckeithan Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 6:55 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest David. Wonderful tribute to your father nd those who werent so lucky.
Crandall Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Thanks Oliver, I enjoyed remembering!
Godwin Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 10:26 PM
I teared up, about ... all of it. Beautiful sentiment swells emotions in me that bring tears to my eyes. Maybe I shouldn't read all the entries, any of the entries, I'm too much of an empath. You got emotive with a dynamite filled pen. Soup mail. CayCay
Crandall Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Thanks so much CayCay!
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