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Written for the contest " In marked territory" sponsored By Edward Ibeh. 

I surf through the crooning crests of warm, blue waters, breathing poetry and prose, carved in topaz and turquoise, for I am the goddess of the bittersweet estuary, crowned with foamy salt and sea glass, intoxicated by inked sapphires and solitude. This quill longs for silence and serenity, where the scarred streaks of sunsets cannot burn the edges of my cerulean canvas, adorned with holographic heartbeats. In this marked territory, there is no oasis for toxic urchins, and the masquerading silhouette of the manipulative muse can never steal the metered soul of multicolored metaphors, floating in sequence of conch-shell cadence, as I wear an aquatic armor, glazed in sparkling scales, erasing remorseful rhymes drenched in repressed rhapsodies. But why does it feel like I’ve written all these in redundant refrains? Perhaps life is an odyssey anchored to boundless boundaries, sailing in repetitive rhythm, reluctant to allow hypocritical skies to invade and engulf thin lines of self-love ruffling along moon-wrapped ripples. The ignorant eyes may place labels and state that I am sadness, speaking melancholy and madness, yet I am everything they know not: the brightest shade of lilacs and amethysts, dwelling in driftwood isolation, weaving chronicles of healing mantras in cursive fluidity of diamond tears, as this is my crystal cyan castle, detached in the solitary lagoon of calcified promises, seeking comfort through the tainted forest of the tidal waves, tasting solace amidst anemic currents. In this lyrical loneliness, I thrive, twirling to the tunes of my own reveries, sheltered and engrossed in free-flowing scars laced in cynical radiance, far from conniving tales of an apocalyptic ambience. I choose to swim alone with eclipsed shadows roaming the abyss of the twilight zone, where no strings of trickery can lure me to an island of misleading flora and fauna, blooming like devious daffodils from Narcissus’s seeds of hatred. I’ll be the voice of Sedna, guiding the faded glows of garnet gravels. I have no desire to chase fleeting gold draped around the aching river of sakura blossoms and milky quartz, for my ink does not long to seize what soars above this marine meadow of lunar-glazed phrases. So I shall remain content in my sweet sanctuary of blissful stillness, composing songs of survival and clarity in timeless resilience.

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Date: 11/24/2024 11:48:00 PM
As I have stated every time I read anything your hand wields, you are simply just an amazing poet. Every detail you hit point on and always create such a vivid picture for your readers to see. You are as of now my Favorite Poet on this site. Congrats
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Ink Empress
Date: 11/25/2024 12:57:00 AM
Dear Brian, that means alot to me really, thank you for your kindness and appreciation, and i enjoyed reading your work too. Looking forward to reading more from you, sending you light today and always
Date: 11/24/2024 8:15:00 PM
As always, a spectacular poem with incredible metaphors, vocabulary and imagery. Bravo, inky! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
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Date: 11/25/2024 12:57:00 AM
Thank you always for appreciating my poems dear EI, i am grateful to have met you here on soup. Sending you light today and always
Date: 11/8/2024 6:03:00 PM
Lovely writing- your muse always delivers something precious <3
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Date: 11/6/2024 6:47:00 AM
Love this one. Feels authentically autobiographical. Liked phrases-no strings of trickery can lure me/in this lyrical loneliness I thrive/my ink does not long to seize what soars (beautiful!) You are truly becoming a world class poet, Inky ! Much blessings to you & Maldives. And ThkU for your comment on my last one. I DO APPRECIATE. Love. Would love to hear you read your poetry.
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Date: 11/4/2024 5:59:00 AM
This piece resonated with me beyond words can ever describe! It's like you've woven the words of my soul and given a voice to those emotions which come after unparalleled suffering... It's true, how our hearts become weary yet wise and we find peace in the loneliness of time, apart from the toxic tapestries of those megalomaniac minds. We are far more in solitude, even when standing alone with an armour of our honestly and resilience! I can just go on and on describing the intricate beauties you've woven here & never get tired, cuz this one deserves all the accolades! I absolutely marvel at the oceanic imagery you've so effortlessly painted and poetically presented, you're truly a mermaid goddess!! " I wear an aquatic armor, glazed in sparkling scales, erasing remorseful rhymes", "as this is my crystal cyan castle, detached in the solitary lagoon of calcified promises,
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Date: 11/4/2024 6:04:00 AM
Detachment and acceptance of the situation can truly give a certain catharsis for our soul, as an opportunity to heal ~ "I choose to swim alone with eclipsed shadows" Ahh, that stanza is absolutely stunning! "So I shall remain content in my sweet sanctuary of blissful stillness, composing songs of survival and clarity in timeless resilience" Absolutely love this! FAVE this is, sweet Ink ~ keep shining and writing, best wishes for the contest!
Date: 11/1/2024 7:54:00 AM
Dearest Empress, your words always take me on an introspective journey, and this one through an aquatic realm of emotions and self-discovery. How great is that!! Your imagery is breathtaking, blending the natural world and inner landscapes with exquisite detail. I can and did fully relate to the exploration of solitude, resilience, and self-love. There is so much power in embracing our unique voices. Your artistry is truly inspiring FAV, and thought-provoking. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/1/2024 4:30:00 AM
I feel as if I am watching the stunning spectacle of Nereid or a nymph dancing over the seafoam and its sleek body cutting through the aquamarine waters, with its fins slicing the surface with effortless ease or is it a dolphin.... in crystal clear waters with playful leaps and a splash of joy? "I choose to swim alone with eclipsed shadows roaming the abyss of the twilight zone, where no strings of trickery can lure me to an island of misleading flora and fauna, blooming like devious daffodils from Narcissus’s seeds of hatred".....Keep swimming unperturbed by the lies and hypocrisy around! "The ignorant eyes may place labels and state that I am sadness, speaking melancholy and madness, yet I am everything they know not: the brightest shade of lilacs and amethysts, dwelling in driftwood isolation" Yes, we know you weave tales of sadness just to uncover your innate worth. Oh Love your language and your magical lines, dear Empress!
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Date: 11/1/2024 12:16:00 AM
breathing poetry and prose, carved in topaz and turquoise,.. ooooo the way that line took my breath away papiiii!!! This quill longs for silence and serenity,.. masquerading silhouette of the manipulative muse.. Perhaps life is an odyssey anchored to boundless boundaries, the flowwwww!!! I thrive, twirling to the tunes of my own reveries, amen to that!!!! sheltered and engrossed in free-flowing scars laced in cynical radiance, Mmm I come n join u aeee .!! Bringing popcorn!! where no strings of trickery can lure me to an island of misleading flora and fauna,.. exactly!! No pain from no heathens indeeeed papi!! for my ink does not long to seize what soars above this marine meadow of lunar-glazed phrases…yaaaz papi!!! Let that power piece poooour!!! Love it!! composing songs of survival and clarity in timeless resilience… love everything abt this papi!!! The strength that oozes out of those piece sooo elegantly is divine !!!! Gorgeous!!!
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Date: 10/31/2024 11:36:00 PM
Dazzling, shimmering metaphors. I can feel the peacefulness in your poem. I like the choices that are offered; safety and happiness versa the ocean's unknown wilds. Good luck with the contest.
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Ink Empress
Date: 11/1/2024 2:45:00 PM
Dear sweet hilda, you are so thoughtful, thank you so very much always
Date: 10/31/2024 10:09:00 PM
Again, stunning vocabulary and metaphors from your gifted pen IE. I know this will do well. Good luck, now get to bed lol. Tom
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Date: 11/1/2024 1:14:00 PM
Haha dear tom, yes i did eventually get some sleep. Friday is weekend for us so, i was happily up and awake! Thank you so much for always being supportive
Date: 10/31/2024 8:11:00 PM
‘ In this lyrical loneliness, I thrive, twirling to the tunes of my own reveries’…. Oh, the sound of music! Your poetry is so lyrical!!! I could sing it all day and night! Thanks for another Ink masterpiece!!!
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Date: 11/1/2024 1:06:00 PM
Thats so kind of you to say that dear robert, you are always so supportive and you see beauty in everything which is nice as not many appreciate my kind of poems. Thank you so very much truly
Date: 10/31/2024 2:56:00 PM
IE, sounds like a poet comfortable in her space. You have the right to that space and your description of it. You weave a beautiful language of your own that seems foreign to my own way of thinking or writing, but I find it beautiful and a lot of fun to read. It takes my brain to an uncharted space and makes me smile!
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Date: 11/1/2024 1:04:00 PM
Dear duke, despite our different ways of writing you always stop by read and comment so mindfully and for this i am truly grateful. Thank you so very much for saying that my poems are beautiful and fun for you: appreciate your kindness truly
Date: 10/31/2024 2:17:00 PM
Ooh love the imagery of " I am the goddess of the bittersweet estuary, crowned with foamy salt and sea glass" feel like that needs painting! Good luck in the contest x
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Date: 10/31/2024 2:22:00 PM
Awwn that means alot coming from you , literally a bleed out and now im hungry and its almost 3 am smh! Haha thank you so much
Date: 10/31/2024 2:13:00 PM
Just wow. Speechless
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Date: 10/31/2024 2:18:00 PM
Cus of the length? Hahaha

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