James Fraser Poet Limerick

In Law I'M An Outlaw

   I'm just a typical working bloke
          Who went to court for taking a toke
      My brief, my attorney
         And my financial journey
I lost now I'm totally broke

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Audrey Haick August 31, 2010 at 10:32 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest, James...Peace, Audrey

Tahera Mannan August 30, 2010 at 9:50 PM Lovely limerick Mr. Fraser. Liked your financial journey. Many congratulations to you. Thanks for the comments.

Audrey Haick August 30, 2010 at 6:51 PM Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Limerick Contest, James. Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2010 at 5:35 AM Congratulations James on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Lawyer Limericks". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 30, 2010 at 5:01 AM Congratulations for this well deserved in Carolyn's contest. James

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2010 at 6:59 PM Yup, that's how it goes. Congrats on your fine limerick. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi August 29, 2010 at 4:22 PM happened to many a poor bloke! HUGS! Light & Love & congrad's

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 29, 2010 at 1:54 PM Congrats James on your big win in the Limerick contest ...enjoy this happy Sunday with luv..

Barbara Gorelick August 29, 2010 at 12:54 PM James, you might want to spend some time with a bag lady..me. ( read my poem..) Congrats on your win. BG

John Freeman August 29, 2010 at 12:35 PM Congratulations, James on an exceptional write in an extremely tough competition. A worthy poem. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson August 29, 2010 at 12:24 PM And that's the way it goes. Congratulations on a good limerick. Love, joyce

Carolyn Devonshire August 29, 2010 at 12:05 PM The "typical working bloke" often suffers at the hands of lawyers, James. Good job! Congratulations on your win! The competition was awesome and every contestant deserves a round of applause. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts August 29, 2010 at 11:50 AM good one , congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2010 at 9:22 PM Good one!!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 24, 2010 at 9:56 AM Enjoyed reading your poetry today James. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels August 24, 2010 at 5:49 AM Great write James, all the best with your witty limerick... Enjoy your Tuesday :) Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta August 23, 2010 at 6:59 PM You enter any litigation as full body and come out as a sausage, James

Poet Destroyer A August 23, 2010 at 3:05 PM Oh! I love it James I love it,..p.d.

Sharon Tideswell August 23, 2010 at 1:54 PM Hey man, coooooooool, haha, no don't worry I didn't take a toke. Great limerick, made me smile ~ Sharon x

Michael J. Falotico August 23, 2010 at 1:45 PM LOL cool write, and message... made me smile. sending soup mail in a bit Michael

Doris Culverhouse August 23, 2010 at 1:18 PM Enjoyed James, hope you will do well in the contest like I told the other humorist...I like a good laugh everyday!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2010 at 12:57 PM Another fine write James and much success in the contest offered... u have a special flair and talent like no other.. enjoyed with luv..ciao..