In Her Copper Coloured Wig

A respectable girl was she; or so she appeared to be 
Living alone in her dear little cottage at number seventy three

Each day she left home bright and early, as she walked to the railway station
Awaiting the train she would ponder upon her total transmogrification

Travelling first class to London, dressed in a suit and leather brogues
She was the picture of respectability, but nobody really knows 

Heading straight for the club in Soho, where she was paid to perform
Descending the stairs, she took a deep breath, as she completely transformed

Into a girl named Sinitta, where dirty old men queued to meet her
She danced with seven fans and with carefully positioned hands

In her copper coloured wig, for she had nothing else to hide behind
Dancing in a trance, she would escape to her unconscious mind

She danced her eyes shut tightly, giving a zombie like display
Her only way of getting through the dance each working day

Whilst traveling home she calculated monies she would earn
For she had reached her breaking point; it was the point of no return

All monies that she’d earnt so far, went to support her dearest Ma
In the best asylum she could find; for sweet dear souls who’d lost their mind


Written 31st October 2018
Contest No 512
Sponsor Brian Strand
1st placement
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 7:59 PM
Wow - great message against quick judgments. Congrats on your wonderful poem, Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Well thank you Line for your congrats and lovely comment. Kindest wishes Ann x
Grasso Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Love this poem, Ann! Congratulations! ...Fran
Gilmour Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Thank you Fran so good to hear from you and I am thrilled you love my poem. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 5:25 PM
This is a beloved tribute for all loving daughters who would do anything to care for their mothers. I loved the compassion conveyed in this lovely winning poem so worthy of your first placement Ann. I hope many others read this gem! Congratulations on your win! : )
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November 3, 2018 at 1:51 AM
Thank you so much Connie, so nice to hear your lovely comments. Kindest thoughts Ann x
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