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In Flight

Among the clouds, today I'll soar spread my wings and fly and with the angels I will dance above the world so high. My heart will beat a song of joy my cares will slip away in my flight, so fancy free upon the wind, this day. I am flying home today! I both love and fear it. Wish me luck! RG

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Moon Harp

Date: 12/28/2024 10:31:00 PM

Robin, I love the rhythmic flow of this lovely poem. Well done.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2009 2:19:00 PM

Home can be where the hurt is aye? Hope all went well. Love Debbie

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/19/2009 9:22:00 AM

The metaphor of flying is so strong... up above where our ills can't touch us. Well done Robin! Love and hugs, Keith

Date: 1/18/2009 4:24:00 PM

Keep on flying! Let those wings soar. Blessings and good luck to you. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/18/2009 2:12:00 PM

no problem. just head for the hudson river and you'll do fine. anywhere else and you might end up dancing and flying with those angels you wrote about. and lets hope those angels have feathers on their wings. jhl

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2009 1:21:00 AM

Dear robin. What a simply lovely poem, uplifting fulled with joy. Fly like a bird all the way home. Love and peace, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 1/18/2009 1:06:00 AM

Nice work Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

John Rhinem

Date: 1/17/2009 8:49:00 PM

Smile~"So Very Pretty Dear Lady!"~"Hello Precious & Lovely & Gifted & Blessed Robin!"~Smile~Well, I have a feeling that You have already landed by now dear~Smile~but I truly hope that You had a wonderful flight, along with Your visit dear beautiful lady!~This was such a bright and hope-filled write here~painted within such an exquisite way~as You have so often seemed to continue to do!!!~I hope "You" are doing perfectly dear!~"My Love To You Always & Forever, John!"~"Sweet Dreams Robin!":)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/17/2009 4:02:00 PM

Thanks for your comments today Robin. Happy to hear that the flight was wonderful. I am sure the young pastor was taken by you..always happy to read your comments my friend. Much love, Chris.

Alana Tye

Date: 1/17/2009 11:30:00 AM

I hope you enjoyed your flight. Love the word usage and as I read, I found that this can also be taken in a spiritual aspect. I often spread my inner wings and take flight, letting the winds of life carry me down mysterious paths. Beautiful write. :) Cheers, Alana

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/17/2009 3:29:00 AM

Good luck, flying is scary!!!!!!!!! be safe, love, Kristin

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/16/2009 12:45:00 PM

Good luck on your flight! nice poem, as always...Maryam

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/16/2009 11:37:00 AM

Happy flight and homecoming. I have a bit of fear when flying. You can tell by my white knuckles..doesnt stop me though. BG Sweet poem.

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/16/2009 11:22:00 AM

Good luck Robin in every way! Hope it is all a positive and uplifting experience. Hugs, Shar xoxo

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/16/2009 9:51:00 AM

Good luck on your flight, I similar fears...Raul

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/16/2009 9:26:00 AM

Robin that is very sweet of you to say. Glad to hear that not being normal is ok...lol.. You are in my thoughts my friend. Love, Chris.

Tyler Martin

Date: 1/16/2009 9:13:00 AM

You'll enjoy the flight, a poet always does and will find something to write about, can't wait to read it..Tyler

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/16/2009 8:45:00 AM

God's speed, Robin....May you find home a safe haven! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/16/2009 8:02:00 AM

Let me know about the journey my friend. I was thinking about someone flying away this morning when I post my poem. This fab..do boys use fab? I never been a normal boy..lol..hope you are smiling.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 1/16/2009 7:47:00 AM

Love the part about your cares slippin away. It sounds sooo yummy. Hope your flight is beautiful. Love ya Laurie

Christy Hardy

Date: 1/16/2009 7:38:00 AM

I finally got on an airplane last year for the first time ever...I loved it, my daughter was a nervous wreck, but I was loving it.....hope to fly again soon.....your poem brought back that memory for me.....happy flight to you....always, Christy

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/16/2009 7:26:00 AM

Good luck to you! THis rhyme is wonderful as it flows well and it has a perfect metre with clear details. Very well written. Michael