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In Fields of Summer

The breeze has stirred the trees with tender strains
of promises.  Refrains we could not keep.
But left behind, a fervent song remains,
in fields of grass, where summer goes to sleep.

Our silhouettes, once sketched beneath the sky,
of fingers, gently placed upon my breast,
are only dreams I've kept.  And now I sigh
from memories the years have laid to rest

The seasons do recall.  Who could forget
the blush of gold upon the summer's cheek?
Those days are gone, without regret, but yet
each dawn brings back the youth we long to seek

When summer's gone, and we, as well must go, 
we'll rest our hearts in leaves of afterglow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Inman Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Hi Carrie, re-reading some of my fav'd poems. This one is beautiful. The last couplet is filled with such longing.
Richards Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Some of these older poems are often lost among the multitudes, and it warms my heart to know someone still finds it worthy. I'm grateful to hear from you :)
Raven Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Hi Carrie, congratulations on your win with this excellent poem. From first to last word i followed your emotional content. Such a wonderful flow and the rhyming is wonderful. All round this is a Sonnet to be saved so i do so. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Roper Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Congratulations on your win.. wonderful imagery ...
Ashley Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Absolutely breathtaking Carrie! Your sonnet is so beautifully expressed in poignant and poetic lines of perfect rhythm, fantastic rhymes and heartbreaking content. You had me from 'In dreams you come to me' and I felt each and every word of your heartfelt poem.. your closing couplet is simply stunning. Congratulations on your excellent win!
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Love your last stanza. Congrats on your win, Carrie.
Cozart Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Really beautiful, Carrie. Gracefully metered with luscious imagery. Congrats.
Haight Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Carrie, your poem is so beautifully expressed with outstanding imagery and it is written in perfect Iambic Pentameter, required for a true Sonnet. Congratulations on your placement (should have been higher) on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Carrie, I love this sonnet. I remember a summer love, it was the summer of "66...ah, such fond memories. Congrats on your placement. John
Scars Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:44 AM
wow! Carrie! the imagery is so beautiful. Your rhythm and rhyme astound me. Beautifully expressed sweet lady :) thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Scars Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 2:22 PM
you're welcome! :)-luloo
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Laura! I'm pleased you enjoyed my glimpse of summertime love !! Thank you for the acknowledgement !
Parker Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Congratulations dear poet, a really well story driven poem, I'm not going to assume it is from an actual memory as you are a good enough writer that it felt like it was real
Cozart Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 5:12 PM
This is beautiful. I can see why you won. Well deserved.
Raina Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Beautiful! Loved your write....congrats on your placement.
Scars Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 2:32 PM
sweet Carrie, this is just beautiful and wonderful imagery...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Carrie, beautiful poem :) congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Lovely Carrie, congratulations...
Krampe Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 9:23 AM
I love your imagery, Carrie. Congrats on your win. Agnes
Fleming Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 3:52 AM
Superbly conceived and composed, Carrie - Deserving of the highest accolades!! My very best regards! :) john
Arnone Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Love this one, Carrie. Very romantic and great word placement. Congrats! :-)
Quigley Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Sweet and heartfelt. Very nice!
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie, beautiful flow, and very romantic. Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Very beautiful, Carrie...and so emotional. Congratulations on your fine win in this 'surrender' Premiere contest. 7 Sandra
Inman Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Carrie, I love this. It is a gentle emotional write filled with beautiful phrases and wonderful meaning. Something everyone will feel at some point in their lives.
Lindley Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 11:04 AM
You hit the bulls-eye with this magnificent sonnet. This is a true gem and I will add this sonnet to my fav list as its so beautifully inspiring!
Mark Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Quite a stunning write you created Carrie, it's poetic elegance is thoroughly defined, by the simplicity you gave it,..I too wish I could climb from the middle of my writes and soar above them like you seem to do effortlessly ...I won't jinx it, but it is bloody good ...Ian x
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 2:28 AM
This is really beautiful Carrie. Your last quatrain was brilliant! I wish I could write like this. I hope to see this gem at the top! 7 ; )
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