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In Fall's Sudden Storm

in fall's sudden storm withering gold leaves scatter . . . my head in dark clouds Oct. 26, 2018 for Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings' Haiku-Senryu- Writing Challenge October 2018- Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/2/2018 7:32:00 PM

Great written Haiku, Andrea, congratulations on your win.

John Michaels

Date: 11/19/2018 10:54:00 AM

Hey, you did a Haiku! Not seen many of these from you... and it's a doozy! The comments below indicate you won, so congratulations (and reason you haven't put your placing at the bottom?)!! All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/19/2018 4:21:00 PM

I don't see the point in putting my placements at the bottom, John. i particularly find it humorous to see people putting "first place in 'such or such' contest" when ALL the placements were given first place. That is so cheesy!!!

Constance La France

Date: 10/30/2018 1:31:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2018 4:23:00 PM

Not surprised to see this on top! Congratulations, Andrea!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/29/2018 4:12:00 PM

Nicely done, congratulations.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/29/2018 1:42:00 PM

You truly know how to write a wonderful haiku, Andrea. Congratulations on a great win! Hugs, Carolyn

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2018 9:34:00 AM

It’s sad to see the leaves leave so early. It was so pretty.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/29/2018 8:06:00 AM

Congrats on your top win with this top verse, Andrea...love & light...^WW^

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/28/2018 7:09:00 PM

Congrats on a suitably moody piece for the time of year, Andrea. Viv x

Charles Messina

Date: 10/28/2018 9:32:00 AM

Wonderful Imagery, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win...Charlie

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/28/2018 9:01:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely images. Enjoyed reading it.

John Lawless

Date: 10/28/2018 8:56:00 AM

an artistic and poignant Senryu Andrea. congrats on the top spot

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/28/2018 4:57:00 AM

Back to congratulate you Andrea. Tom.

Lycia Harding

Date: 10/27/2018 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations, Dre! I love this Haiku, it's brooding and beautiful. xoxo

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2018 4:36:00 PM

This must have been a late entry, Andrea, for how else could I have missed it!! Very much deserving of first place! Congratulations! Regards // paul

P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/27/2018 3:50:00 PM

Congratulations :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/27/2018 3:19:00 PM

My head feels like that today, congratulations on your first place win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2018 3:09:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great Haiku win, Andrea :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Therese Bacha

Date: 10/27/2018 11:55:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Love your head, i got a soup mail it said but, i don't know how to see it, i forgot. Beautiful verse for the contest a winner as usual. Miss you, i pray you are doing great. Love Terry oxoxo Now i will be back and forth here.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/26/2018 1:58:00 PM

Oh this is a good one Andrea! : )

Chris Green

Date: 10/26/2018 1:58:00 PM

Really nice Andrea. We have experience a few of those autumn storms here lately, but finally the sun has returned.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/26/2018 1:52:00 PM

Lovely image Andrea, good luck. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2018 1:41:00 PM

- Yes, the fall is stormy ... lovely written, Andrea - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2018 1:26:00 PM

A beauty, dear friend!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/26/2018 12:51:00 PM

I was thinking today as I saw leaves raining down, that they fall like snow during a snow storm. I like the way you tied in your feelings also, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/28/2018 1:41:00 AM

so glad you noticed what I was going for. this was inspired by how I have been feeling lately but today hope came into view!