In Eternal Memory - Collaboration With Darren White

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Too many days of torment have come I lower my head and bow I’m done For I once knew of a life so grand From wide blue oceans to every land I have no rhythm, and no cadence I fly, my mind is free I leave you here, you torturers of souls and body, you can never have the real me For in my heart there burns a flame And in my head lies chemistry The element all at beck and call In these eyes a light you’ll see I shine on you in sun dust particles reflecting spectral colours back at you I will live in you, will thaw the cold, will make you human A kaleidoscope of colours you are mixture of cosmic dancing stars the rainbow over heaven awaits for you no matter the distance that you stroll And when we end, take our place in this dark night, or dawning light You will remember, and smile We will be together in eternal memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/29/2018 6:05:00 AM
I like the way links together, the verses sharing the meaning
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Date: 7/18/2017 1:29:00 AM
Wonderful teamwork Darren and WW. Love the poetry you two create...Maria
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Date: 7/17/2017 5:44:00 AM
Excellent collaboration, you two make a great team..
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Date: 7/15/2017 8:53:00 PM
Wonderful write, WW and Darren, love the imagery and great flow
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Date: 7/14/2017 5:47:00 PM
Wonderful poem, WW and Darren. The imagery is unique and sparkling. Great lines throughout. Mighty fine poetry. Love always.
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Date: 7/13/2017 5:58:00 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful collaboration! Very well done both of you :)
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Date: 7/13/2017 5:23:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration Darren and White Wolf...it flowed well
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:34:00 PM
Hey!...it's the Wolf and the penguin...what a great duet...Bravo poets...^WW^
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Date: 7/12/2017 5:47:00 PM
This is a beautiful collaboration you two <3 <3 <3 your writing together flows so well! This is a fave!!!
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Date: 7/12/2017 3:25:00 PM
You and Darren seem like similar guys to me in the way you have a spiritual connection to things, so it is very fitting that you did a poem such as this one together. Very lovely job, Budgie!! (along with Darren)
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 3:33:00 PM
I do believe we do too! You'd never know who wrote which stanzas in this piece! Thanks, Andrea /|\
Date: 7/12/2017 1:38:00 PM
This is beautiful guys:) I love it!
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 2:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel /|\
Date: 7/12/2017 9:50:00 AM
the rainbow of heaven awaits...how fitting....wonderful
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 2:17:00 PM
Thanks, Tim Tam /|\
Date: 7/12/2017 9:11:00 AM
Wonderful you two :) xomo
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thank you from both of us, Maureen /|\
Date: 7/12/2017 8:09:00 AM
Each time you collaborate there is no way the result to be less than superb, dear, WW and dear, DW! Loved it!
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 9:39:00 AM
You are such a dear soul to say these things, Demetrios! You always brighten my path with your presence! /|\
Date: 7/12/2017 6:44:00 AM
I read your comment, Darren, and wanted to add that in poetry we should not lock ourselves into a comfort zone. If we allow our minds and hearts to guide our pens we become free to travel anywhere...You've both done that here and in your Flight of the Whites.
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 6:50:00 AM
You are a sweet soothsayer, Lin, and a woman of much wisdom! I thank ye for your gracious visit! Enjoy your night /|\
Date: 7/12/2017 6:31:00 AM
Beautifully done my friends. This is such a soft and flowing piece that really touches the heart and soul. Nice one both of you.
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! Always a pleasure to see you mate /|\
Date: 7/12/2017 4:41:00 AM
Alwaya a pleasure to work with you :) This time I forced you out of your comfort zone, I hope you don't mind...
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White Wolf
Date: 7/12/2017 4:46:00 AM
Be strong like the oak but bend like the willow! That kind of force I like! When we hit our zone it just floods, doesn't it? I am honoured pontiff poet /|\
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