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In Effortless Glide - Air Balloons

In effortless glide Amidst the invisible thermals Air balloons do soar

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 4:01:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2011 10:52:00 PM

Congrats james on your well deserved win in this Haiku contest!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 5:46:00 PM

James,, coolio,&, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/10/2011 3:07:00 PM

Hello James, Congratulations on your win for this lovely Haiku. Well done. As Always, Shar

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/10/2011 2:51:00 PM

Great to see your name in the winners circle my friend,,,Congrats to you !!!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/10/2011 2:19:00 PM

Reading this reminds me of the hit song "Up Up and Away" by the Fifth Dimension. It must be fun to ride in a balloon. No wonder you won with this entry!

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 1/10/2011 10:13:00 AM

Soar some more, James! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 8:24:00 AM

Great one..Let the soaring begin..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 7:15:00 AM

Congratulations, James. Nice to see this one soaring up there in the top! Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 3:02:00 AM

Congratulations James with this gem making it to the winner's list ;-) WN

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/10/2011 2:56:00 AM

Many congratulations for this wonderful win james.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2011 12:10:00 AM

lovely!! cheesr for the win in this contest, james! :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 11:42:00 PM

Congrats James on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride.. enjoy your free flight to the top of the charts with luv..

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2011 10:09:00 PM

JAMES, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

De R

Date: 12/12/2010 10:19:00 AM

A great image painted by you little haiku, James. This is so cute:) Hugs, Emilia:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/9/2010 11:27:00 AM

What an image James!! love it, all the best for the contest.. Hope your week's been a good one ;) xx

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/7/2010 9:35:00 AM

I love this picture, James..especially the phrase..."invisible thermals"! This picture will hang on my fav. list! Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:35:00 PM

cool line that second part!! Good luck in the contest, James.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 4:35:00 PM

A creative approach with a scientific feel to it, James! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:35:00 PM

Quite creative and imaginative entry in the contest, Good luck. James

James Fraser

Date: 12/6/2010 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Constance for your kind comments. There was a balloon above my Haiku, to make the poem a little more realistic. Once you save something like this, it all goes pear shaped. Maybe it's about time the Soup had a preview page, and in turn what your satisfied with , is what turns out. The Concrete form would then be more challengeable to many poets who have steered clear of it. Basically I have wasted just over an hour of my time....:(

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/6/2010 2:11:00 PM

lovely entry for the cotnest James, best of luck

Constance La France

Date: 12/6/2010 2:01:00 PM

How creative and wonderful, James, this is a winner for sure~~