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In Deep Slumber

In a deep slumber Jane awakes startled Tears are rolling down Her cheeks quickly She lets the tears flow Then hugs her inner child Speaks softly, calmly Until she is calm Then returns to sleep Back into a deep slumber

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Date: 4/30/2020 12:26:00 PM
I too weep in my dreams and awake with tearful eyes.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2020 1:57:00 PM
Hello Dave Collins, we both do the same in our sleep. It was my inner child crying and when i wake upmy eyes are teary. Enjoy your day my fiend. be safe.
Date: 9/15/2019 8:29:00 AM
Lovely poem :-) x
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/15/2019 11:55:00 AM
Hello Elaine Perrin, I hope you are having a lovely day. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.x
Date: 7/23/2019 6:06:00 PM
Vivid, alluring, refreshing yet blessing... Nighty-night...and don't let yourself be in fright LOL Blessed dreams and good night James
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2019 8:15:00 AM
Hello James Edward Lee Sr., thank you for the lovely comment. I will try hard not to be in fright. LOL. Blessed dreams to you. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/19/2019 4:17:00 PM
a nice little description of interrupted sleep. I have such a hard time getting back to sleep I hate waking up unexpectedly (I am glad I rarely have nightmares though, as this one so clearly shows!)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/20/2019 12:14:00 PM
Hello Andrea, I drink Lavender tea before bed time. It works for me. I bought some today. I do have nightmares sometimes. But not too often. Yes she did have a nightmare. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/16/2019 2:29:00 PM
Hi Darlene, Oh my did she have a nightmare? It was good to see her embrace the inner child to calm herself down. By her during that she was able to return to sleep. I enjoyed the read my friend. Have an incredible day:-) Alexis
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2019 5:02:00 PM
Hello Alexis Y. Yes she did have a nightmare. yes she does this often to calm the inner child. Then returns back to sleep.I am pleased that you enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene.
Date: 7/16/2019 2:25:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2019 5:03:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, thank you so much for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 7/15/2019 11:39:00 PM
I like it Miss Darlene!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2019 1:44:00 PM
Hello Timothy McGuire,so nice to see you at my sight. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/15/2019 4:08:00 PM
Love this, it reads so calm, in it's positivity way
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2019 8:02:00 PM
Hello Harry Horseman, yes it is Harry. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 7/15/2019 4:02:00 PM
Oh, I love how she is calmed and returned to sleep. Well done Darlene. :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2019 8:04:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Thank you Heidi.yes she had to calm the inner child in order to get back to sleep. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 7/14/2019 6:51:00 PM
I really like that, lovely penning Darlene. xomo!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2019 10:59:00 AM
Hello Maureen, thank you for the lovely comment. Maureen. xomo have a nice day my friend.

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