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In Costco

In Costco; crowds jostle carts nudge. Trying to be invisible. An acquaintance recognizes me, asks: ‘how am I doing?' I reply, I don’t like the color purple, quickly move on. Outside, a bleak sky hovers as if it had nowhere else to go. A belligerent Santa shakes a plastic bucket under my nose. I used to be able to wiggle my ears – that’s just a fact. Not bragging. Driving home, I ask myself how I’m doing? I definitely need to consider that one day.

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Date: 3/17/2022 6:28:00 PM
Again, this is exceptional writing, Eric. Thanks for presenting these images and making them resonate with us.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 5/3/2022 8:15:00 AM
My pleasure L Milton. glad you liked tit.

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