In Air So Slow

My summer break. . . I’ve slept in late;
I wake to find a yellow glare
of sunshine through my open blinds.
And night of rain has left me heir to lethargy,
 for once I’m dressed,
I barely make it down each stair.
I trudge out to the patio
to lounge in my umbrella chair.
I cannot sit there very long.
My clothes stick to me everywhere.

Humidity has made her play
for Mr. Sun, and their affair
is heating up to maximum.
Their passion now has robbed my air.
Listlessly I rise to strip
down to bra and underwear;
I figure since the yard is fenced,
what the heck!  My top I’ll bare.
I set the sprinkler on me too
and sit, eyes closed, without a care.

I hear a sound; next thing I know
my eyes meet those of a frightened stare.
Giggling comes from above my fence
while I grab a shirt to hide my “pair.”
In air so slow, the boy runs fast,
and as he flees, I’m well aware
that I just played a major role
in neighbor boys’ Truth or Dare!

(by the way, pure fiction, did I fool anyone?)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Yvonne Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 8:46 AM
This a great poem, you should write an accompanying poem. It would make sens because the you would have another great pair.
May Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 9:12 PM
A lovely story Andrea...congrats on your win
Callus Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 1:45 PM
The witty Andrea deserving of a fine placing! congrats. immensely enjoyed:) (Now...where have I heard of that boy before!) // paul
Parker Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Congratulaions on your win, as for its truth only you know the answer to that my friend the fact you rushed to deny makes me go hmmmm...I think we need to question the kid
A. Sharma Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Wonderful fictional write Andrea! Great win congrats!
A   Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:03 AM
ANDREA... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"
Poet Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 10:33 AM
I was just that type of naughty boy.Hahaha very much enjoyed -kash
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Aloha, Connie
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Koolio poem Andrea, a delightful read this fine Sunday. Many congratulations on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest with this exceptional write ..so creative too.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend..with luv..
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:04 AM
naughty naughty boys! Enjoyed this fun & sneaky poem, Andrea! Definitely liked how Mr. Sun was having an affair with Humidity, too! Congrats for being among my winners :) -- hugs, nikko :)
Henderson Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 7:43 PM
I like this very good write. For some reason the rhyme pattern you used stays with you longer than abab or aabb. Sort of like a good visual in a haiku. Part of the secret may be the 8 or 10 lines per verse. I think it is better than mine in that sense. I'm always afraid I will run out of rhymes but I did note that if you make it long enough one cannot remember if rhymes have been used more that once. Not that it really matters but I usually avoid if possible. It is good.
Brumley Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 4:53 AM
No, but I was right there with those boys, giggling and poking and staring! Will you be performing tomorrow morning as well?
Harrison Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Sure it is...that's what they all say! Guess they got an eyeful! Too cute.
Chachere Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 10:52 PM
haha.lol.yeah right, no way i didn't believe you even for a little, but the image in your poem though,wow, no words..only you would know.hahaa, but geez it would feel so free. funny because my upper 'chest' parts stick to me, only in "utter heat".they burn up in there! hey, i saw Eclipse today! ~always
Adeite Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 11:19 AM
i added you on Facebook
Adeite Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 11:13 AM
how i wish we could discuss in real time, the, i will be able to answer all your questions the way I will love it.
Adeite Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 10:49 AM
i have replied you mom!, you are just enjoying life. ... you need it
Knop Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Hahaha, Andrea, liked your poe, so funny!!! Now temperatures are rising here to 100°C F but there is no way to have a cold shower in the garden! Enjoyed to read your poem and thanks for your mail with those wonderful floral pictures!...Have a great week ahead...Love, Gert
A   Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 11:09 PM
nice one Andrea your comment just fit perfect with my poem,,(tha Weather)!!! thanks... lolll..i can read this one ,, and it gives me the chuckles when you wake up... you are funny as well,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 3:03 PM
U had me going Andrea.. a lovely picture u painted with your brilliant words... enjoy your break time .. u earned it so well.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA
Devonshire Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 1:57 PM
LOL Had a good laugh thinking of Ms. Humidity and Mr. Sun having an affair. It's an ongoing one almost year round in Florida. Enjoyed the thought of you having to "hide your pair" from the neihborhood boys. Quite a fun read, Andrea. Enjoy your Fourth of July weekend! Love, Carolyn
Tideswell Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 1:45 PM
lol, great write Andrea. The first few lines are beautifully descriptive and give no hint at all of the way the poem will develop. Fun to read ~ Sharon :)
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