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In Air So Slow

My summer break. . . I’ve slept in late; I wake to find a yellow glare of sunshine through my open blinds. And night of rain has left me heir to lethargy, for once I’m dressed, I barely make it down each stair. I trudge out to the patio to lounge in my umbrella chair. I cannot sit there very long. My clothes stick to me everywhere. Humidity has made her play for Mr. Sun, and their affair is heating up to maximum. Their passion now has robbed my air. Listlessly I rise to strip down to bra and underwear; I figure since the yard is fenced, what the heck! My top I’ll bare. I set the sprinkler on me too and sit, eyes closed, without a care. I hear a sound; next thing I know my eyes meet those of a frightened stare. Giggling comes from above my fence while I grab a shirt to hide my “pair.” In air so slow, the boy runs fast, and as he flees, I’m well aware that I just played a major role in neighbor boys’ Truth or Dare! (by the way, pure fiction, did I fool anyone?)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/7/2014 8:46:00 AM
This a great poem, you should write an accompanying poem. It would make sens because the you would have another great pair.
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Date: 5/2/2014 9:12:00 PM
A lovely story Andrea...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/1/2014 1:45:00 PM
The witty Andrea deserving of a fine placing! congrats. immensely enjoyed:) (Now...where have I heard of that boy before!) // paul
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Date: 5/1/2014 12:50:00 PM
Congratulaions on your win, as for its truth only you know the answer to that my friend the fact you rushed to deny makes me go hmmmm...I think we need to question the kid
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Date: 5/1/2014 12:38:00 PM
Wonderful fictional write Andrea! Great win congrats!
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Date: 5/1/2014 11:03:00 AM
ANDREA... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:33:00 AM
I was just that type of naughty boy.Hahaha very much enjoyed -kash
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:39:00 AM
Koolio poem Andrea, a delightful read this fine Sunday. Many congratulations on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest with this exceptional write ..so creative too.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:04:00 AM
naughty naughty boys! Enjoyed this fun & sneaky poem, Andrea! Definitely liked how Mr. Sun was having an affair with Humidity, too! Congrats for being among my winners :) -- hugs, nikko :)
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:43:00 PM
I like this very good write. For some reason the rhyme pattern you used stays with you longer than abab or aabb. Sort of like a good visual in a haiku. Part of the secret may be the 8 or 10 lines per verse. I think it is better than mine in that sense. I'm always afraid I will run out of rhymes but I did note that if you make it long enough one cannot remember if rhymes have been used more that once. Not that it really matters but I usually avoid if possible. It is good.
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Date: 7/9/2010 4:53:00 AM
No, but I was right there with those boys, giggling and poking and staring! Will you be performing tomorrow morning as well?
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Date: 7/7/2010 8:40:00 PM
Sure it is...that's what they all say! Guess they got an eyeful! Too cute.
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:52:00 PM
haha.lol.yeah right, no way i didn't believe you even for a little, but the image in your poem though,wow, no words..only you would know.hahaa, but geez it would feel so free. funny because my upper 'chest' parts stick to me, only in "utter heat".they burn up in there! hey, i saw Eclipse today! ~always
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Date: 7/4/2010 11:19:00 AM
i added you on Facebook
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Date: 7/4/2010 11:13:00 AM
how i wish we could discuss in real time, the, i will be able to answer all your questions the way I will love it.
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Date: 7/4/2010 10:49:00 AM
i have replied you mom!, you are just enjoying life. ... you need it
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Date: 7/4/2010 7:51:00 AM
Hahaha, Andrea, liked your poe, so funny!!! Now temperatures are rising here to 100°C F but there is no way to have a cold shower in the garden! Enjoyed to read your poem and thanks for your mail with those wonderful floral pictures!...Have a great week ahead...Love, Gert
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:09:00 PM
nice one Andrea your comment just fit perfect with my poem,,(tha Weather)!!! thanks... lolll..i can read this one ,, and it gives me the chuckles when you wake up... you are funny as well,..p.d.
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Date: 7/3/2010 3:03:00 PM
U had me going Andrea.. a lovely picture u painted with your brilliant words... enjoy your break time .. u earned it so well.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA
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Date: 7/3/2010 1:57:00 PM
LOL Had a good laugh thinking of Ms. Humidity and Mr. Sun having an affair. It's an ongoing one almost year round in Florida. Enjoyed the thought of you having to "hide your pair" from the neihborhood boys. Quite a fun read, Andrea. Enjoy your Fourth of July weekend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 1:45:00 PM
lol, great write Andrea. The first few lines are beautifully descriptive and give no hint at all of the way the poem will develop. Fun to read ~ Sharon :)
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