In a Rush To Hide the Truth

I really wish I remembered what I told you the other day
When you asked me where I was and why I didn’t call?
I rushed to hide the truth and I forgot where I put it away.

As I stand here—sweating, I feel you sensing my delay
To answer uncomplicated questions I should recall.
I really wish I remembered what I told you the other day

Since, my deceit could destroy the perfect picture I portray,
Of a good and honest man who would never let trickery befall
So, I rushed to hide the truth and forgot where I put it away.

Maybe, I could tell you I left the answer with my attaché 
Or, maybe I could just grunt and grab my chest and fall?
I really wish I remembered what I told you the other day!

Sense and reason screamed at my conscience not to betray,
But, I did it anyway; it was just so small, what could be the downfall?
Then, I rushed to hide the truth and I forgot where I put it away

Because, I thought if I told you the truth you wouldn’t stay,
And since I’m so selfish—I hope I told you I was at the mall…
I really wish I remembered what I told you the other day;
But, I rushed to hide the truth and I forgot where I put it away.

Submitted for Dr. Ram's "Villanelle Me" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Adeite Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Great entry and a worthy win. Enjoy your winnings. keep up the great work. Love, Adeleke
Green Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 9:19 AM
Great job, congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Congrats Mike on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this awesome Villanelle piece.. enjoy your big win .. and success.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation ..watching fireworks at 3a.m...AlohA...
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:33 AM
VEry clever villanelle. Congratulations on your win!
Freeman Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:15 PM
Congratulations Mike on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:40 PM
Congrats on the 5th place win in my contest
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:19 PM
Oh yes truth is easier to remember. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Got a chuckle..It is sorta like the song "That's My Story And I'm Sticking To It"...Sara
Muzzey Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 8:18 AM
An excelent write, I enjoyed it tremendously! Good luck in the contest, I think it will do very well. Caryl
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June 14, 2010 at 9:56 PM
it's hard to keep consisting lies, enjoyed your write, and good luck on the contest..P.D.
Pattison Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 2:52 PM
A very witty and sharp bit of writing here, I enjoyed it, thanks for uploading, from Gavin.
Hilliker Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Nicely written. I like it! Good luck in the contest.
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